Computermouse avatar
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 24 February 2026 at 3:49pm
Topic: Computermouse avatar
Posted By: crukis
Subject: Computermouse avatar
Date Posted: 29 September 2007 at 2:50am
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Hey! I'm making a computermouse for my avatar. I'm wondering what you think about it and what I should change. I'm may make a lasermouse with animation later  . Please com & crit. ------------- Rosenborg 2-0 Valencia! Steffen Iversen! |
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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 29 September 2007 at 4:16am
Pillowshading Make the light come from the left, the right, bottom, top, but NOT the middle! ------------- |
Posted By: FrostPumpkin
Date Posted: 29 September 2007 at 4:21am
| looks like a mouse sculpted in a piece of rock :/ |
Posted By: crukis
Date Posted: 29 September 2007 at 4:22am
k, tnx, bye 
------------- Rosenborg 2-0 Valencia! Steffen Iversen! |
Posted By: A.B.
Date Posted: 29 September 2007 at 6:31am
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Really good.
Didn't like the perspective, though. :/
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Posted By: MashPotato
Date Posted: 29 September 2007 at 7:04am
I think it's a little over anti-aliased, makes it seem a bit fuzzy. I'm not great at aa, but I did a quick edit to give you an idea what I mean (I only changed the aa on the right side) Remember, you don't need to add aa everywhere, only to smooth out jaggies  Also, I got rid of the black outlines as it made the parts of the mouse "bulge", and edited the lower curve of the mouse button and side a bit. I didn't touch the shading, but I would suggest keeping the shadows regular and in keeping with the curves of the mouse. Hope this helps, keep at it! ------------- http://theindiestone.com - the INDIE STONE |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 29 September 2007 at 9:33am
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i would use less dithering as well.
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