"finish her!"
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 09 September 2025 at 5:45pm
Topic: "finish her!"
Posted By: Squirrelsquid
Subject: "finish her!"
Date Posted: 09 October 2007 at 12:43pm
well the title might be a bit missleading, but I decided to finish an
older sprite of mine, that was originaly intended for a weekly
competition ( the fighter sprite challenge) but I never realy finished
it. So I thought I'd finish it now. :) she's a larger sprite of the character I used in this mockup:  I'm not to sure if the muscles on the legs are correct, and she's obviously missing her jacket and red "neckthing". oh, and I changed the design of the gunblade. |
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Posted By: Maarten
Date Posted: 09 October 2007 at 1:05pm
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Love the pose. Beautifull stuff man. I can only hope to ever reach your level!
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Posted By: MashPotato
Date Posted: 09 October 2007 at 2:08pm
Lookin' good so far  The leg muscles seem to be fanning outward a bit too much ( http://www.medecine-et-sante.com/gimages/muscles-membrinf.jpg - here's a ref , so you can see what I mean), and this may just be a personal-taste thing, but I find that the outlines used for the definition of the leg muscles are a little harsh and make them stand out too much. The foot on our right might be a little too forward-facing, but I'm not sure.Looking forward to seeing this finished!  ------------- http://theindiestone.com - the INDIE STONE |
Posted By: Squirrelsquid
Date Posted: 09 October 2007 at 2:18pm
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thanks for the feedback, MashPotato, the ref is indeed helpfull. and
you'r also right about the muscles, they seem a little harsh. I'll adress these when I pixel with a tablet again, forgot my pen at work. in the mean time, here's some mouse pixeling:  If I ever where to make that game, I'd make it on the PSP, with huge sprites ;) will work on the mockup as well, currently it's more likea bunch of floor tiles thrown all over the place... anyway, I have no idea what the material is, she's walking on. |
Posted By: Squirrelsquid
Date Posted: 12 October 2007 at 10:38am
here's some more progress:  |
Posted By: eghost
Date Posted: 12 October 2007 at 10:40am
Lookin' good...My only nitpick at this point would be the highlight down at the crotch...
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Posted By: Squirrelsquid
Date Posted: 12 October 2007 at 10:45am
ok here's an edit of the crotch: 
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Posted By: eghost
Date Posted: 12 October 2007 at 10:47am
Reads much better... Looks great...
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Posted By: Maarten
Date Posted: 12 October 2007 at 11:34am
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Thanks a lot for the feedback. Would love to play a game like this :)
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Posted By: Squirrelsquid
Date Posted: 12 October 2007 at 2:01pm
here's more progress on the mockup: I added an Ice minion, as well as a brand new king size hud. |
Posted By: Squirrelsquid
Date Posted: 12 October 2007 at 5:03pm
more progress on the mockup: played with the dirt-colors  and even more progress! I finished aki's clothing  |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 12 October 2007 at 10:11pm
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I love where its going but the platform does not match the sprite as good as it can be because it seems that the sprites color and definition is different from the platform. The UI is nice, nice.
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Posted By: Squirrelsquid
Date Posted: 13 October 2007 at 6:19am
you'r right Jal, the contrast of the floor was a bit low... so it
looked like as if the character is glowing. I increased the contrast of
the tiles, I think they tie together a lot better now. |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 13 October 2007 at 8:33am
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yup, way better. The sprite is beautiful, I failed to mention.
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Posted By: Squirrelsquid
Date Posted: 15 October 2007 at 3:21pm
 more progress... blocked out an enemy... I like the head and the arms, but I'm not to sure if I like the rest of the body... |
Posted By: MurrMan
Date Posted: 16 October 2007 at 6:26pm
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you know what that enemy reminds me of? those robots from megaman legends for the PSX. I love that style. the tiles are nice but he background (the tree and those rocks) seems a little flat
------------- I have plenty of emotions; It is Sleep that i lack |
Posted By: Squirrelsquid
Date Posted: 18 October 2007 at 6:46pm
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you'r right Murr, on the flatness, never played legends though. I'll adress the flatness soon here's some progress:  ditched the red floor... didn't realy like it... oh, and there will be some platform on the other side... there won't be a dead void. ;) |
Posted By: Squirrelsquid
Date Posted: 19 October 2007 at 8:30am
finished up the platform: |
Posted By: Fuzzyleaves
Date Posted: 22 October 2007 at 10:17am
| Have some spiderwebs, in the original those are spiderwebs right? |