Fighter dude
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 18 December 2025 at 8:38pm
Topic: Fighter dude
Posted By: Norlem
Subject: Fighter dude
Date Posted: 14 October 2007 at 1:01pm
Hi! this evening i felt like i wanted to learn how to sprite side scroller so i gave it a attempt, here it is
 I am pretty happy with the head but the shape of the body still needs to be complete note that i am still working on the line art^^ anyway tell me what i should do to improve it ! ;D |
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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 14 October 2007 at 1:20pm
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His left elbow should be waaay higer! ------------- |
Posted By: Norlem
Date Posted: 14 October 2007 at 1:29pm
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Yah i get you're point, it was a easy fix: 
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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 14 October 2007 at 1:59pm
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Originally posted by Norlem Yah i get you're point, it was a easy fix: thats nice too, but I ment his left, not our left ------------- |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 15 October 2007 at 8:07am
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try to have some kind of reference with real human anatomy, so it wouldn't appear to be made of clay. even if this is supposed to be cartoonish.
------------- I ate leel's babies |
Posted By: Norlem
Date Posted: 16 October 2007 at 2:23pm
Hi again, i have tooked your critizm and here is another verision: I went wild when i started to do the mucles, but i hope he still looks good C+C |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 16 October 2007 at 3:03pm
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better, i would move the head one or two pixels to the left, and put an eye on that belt and the connection between the torso and the legs
------------- I ate leel's babies |
Posted By: Norlem
Date Posted: 17 October 2007 at 8:10am
I tried to fix it up, here is the verision after those fixes, i aint to happy with the leggs yet, i dunno.. is it something wrong with the antomy? |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 17 October 2007 at 11:17am
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the abs. check how those abs are, and compare them with a photo reference. they usually follow a straight line from the chest to the floor. ""usually"", because it depends on the pose, and this's not the case. also, the legs still seems to be unnconected with the rest of the body. i would stop, check some sprites for ideas and redo them. ------------- I ate leel's babies |