My Argiope WIP
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Topic: My Argiope WIP
Posted By: Koch
Subject: My Argiope WIP
Date Posted: 19 October 2007 at 11:36am
This was rejected, please tell me how I should improve this. Thanks. |
Replies:
Posted By: BlackDragon
Date Posted: 19 October 2007 at 11:40am
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How about more symmetry? Some of his legs looks shorter than the other. And his body looks like it was stepped on. ------------- "A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie |
Posted By: Koch
Date Posted: 19 October 2007 at 1:03pm
In this species the legs aren't the same size anyway, how can I make the abdomen look more bulbous? |
Posted By: BlackDragon
Date Posted: 19 October 2007 at 1:20pm
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Even so, the legs still look a little odd. Use higher contrast and shading to make the body more "bolbous". Try to match the pattern ont the spider, also. Yours looks sketchy. ------------- "A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie |
Posted By: Koch
Date Posted: 19 October 2007 at 1:24pm
| I didn't use this pic as a reference, each spider has it's slightly unique alteration of pattern. I'll try that to make it appear more bulbous... yes, that is a word, it doesn't need quotation marks. Thanks. |