Challenge WIP
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 18 December 2025 at 6:51pm
Topic: Challenge WIP
Posted By: Jimmy Bojangles
Subject: Challenge WIP
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 9:00am
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AGH! I actually got the damn vegtable warrior looking alright, and I notice I have an extra colour! Damn!
Anyways, I have three versions here ( The first one doesn't have the correct amount of colours sadly. I'm absolutely atrocious at making legs, sadly. 1: 
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Any and all help is appreciated! 
Oh, and incase you can't tell, it's a tomato fighter! :Quckie edit: Changed the sword and some shading a bit. Minor edit. 
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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 9:57am
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Lower the saturation of the red.. and enlarge canvas so you can show the full sword.. ------------- |
Posted By: Jimmy Bojangles
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 10:27am
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That is the full sword, and sadly, the saturation has to stay, because I don't really want it to be a rotten tomato.
:ANIMATION EDIT!: 
And with trans! 
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Posted By: BlackDragon
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 2:11pm
Well, it will look better.
 Also add more detail and more CONTRAST. Make sure you have good lines before you go ahead and animate. The way he holds his arm away from his body looks unnatural. Also he is holding his sword just above his shoulder when normally you would rest upon it. ------------- "A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie |
Posted By: Jimmy Bojangles
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 2:33pm
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Yeah, I see what you mean, I should concentrate on getting my skills up before I start animating. Ah well, I'll use what you gave me, and try to improve.
Quick edit: Is this any better? Or did I over AA? :\ 
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Posted By: BlackDragon
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 3:22pm
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Its so much better now! 1 thing- don't AA on 45 degree angles. ------------- "A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie |
Posted By: Squirrelsquid
Date Posted: 05 November 2007 at 4:08pm
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AAing a 45 degree angle is not a good idea. it makes the line thick and blurry. some yellow-greensih shade would look good as a highlight on the leaf, IMO. ------------- vote for squirrels crates! |