Avvy
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 01 August 2026 at 4:24pm
Topic: Avvy
Posted By: D-Puff
Subject: Avvy
Date Posted: 13 November 2007 at 5:42pm
Heres my avvy i made, ive put this aside for a while, but finally decided to finish it. I was wondered if there was anything i could revise before i submitted it. any suggestions? |
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Posted By: greenraven
Date Posted: 13 November 2007 at 5:48pm
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Get rid of the white background. The left ear seems to be missing the... how should I put this... the ear hole. Hope you can understand what I mean. The dark area. Otherwise good job.  -------------  "pwnage comes with patience, practice and planning." ~ Jalonso 
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Posted By: D-Puff
Date Posted: 13 November 2007 at 5:52pm
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Originally posted by greenraven Get rid of the white background. The left ear seems to be missing the... how should I put this... the ear hole. Hope you can understand what I mean. The dark area. Otherwise good job. well, as for the background, of course i'll get rid of that, but the left ear is facing the opposite way, so of course you cant see the hole  |
Posted By: Noburo
Date Posted: 14 November 2007 at 9:31am
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Green raven is right, at the way you have him standing you would be able to see part of it. Also, keep to one light source. I made a quick edit to show you what I mean.  [Light source is coming from upper left] Edit - Forgot to mention this, but the dither pattern only appearing in the hair doesn't really fit. |
Posted By: D-Puff
Date Posted: 16 November 2007 at 4:20am
all right, back to the forum. this is the one i posted in the gallery- i'll work on another ASAP, but i'm on my way to school, and i'll work on it get back |