"Bathroom" -- New to this, please C&C
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Printed Date: 10 September 2025 at 2:33pm
Topic: "Bathroom" -- New to this, please C&C
Posted By: Shann
Subject: "Bathroom" -- New to this, please C&C
Date Posted: 20 July 2005 at 1:16am
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Hi, this is my first ever pixel-art, it's inspired by my friends who say i love bathing...
Please C&C, apparently not good enough to be accepted yet. Thanks. |
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Posted By: Ensellitis
Date Posted: 20 July 2005 at 1:59am
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First thing that sticks out is the tub. It looks really flat,
like a cardboard cutout. Try doing some shading to it and use a
lighter outline to show the pertruding areas. The shower head also
needs some sort of shadin, or even an outline to it. Also, the
back wall where the tub is has no bevel to the times, well a little,
but not enough to be seen. Is that grey square a tv? It needs something to identify what it is. Other than that, maybe some shadows and more texturing. Looking good though, keep up the work! ------------- There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
Posted By: Monstara
Date Posted: 20 July 2005 at 2:23am
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If this is your first, it's great. The first thing that strikes me is that the tub looks like it is about to fall back (i.e. the far side is lower than the closer one. Apart from that - more detail :) |
Posted By: Shann
Date Posted: 20 July 2005 at 8:42am
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Hey guys thanks for the comments! Appreciates it! |
Posted By: Saiklor
Date Posted: 20 July 2005 at 4:28pm
| there's a funny visual thing going on with the shelf on the lefthand wall, it lines up precisely with the line of the floor and it makes my brain go "ahck!" maybe just move it up 1 pixel or down 1 pixel? or add something below it to make this optical illusion go away. |
Posted By: pixelblink
Date Posted: 20 July 2005 at 4:42pm
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I completey agree with everyones comments so far. Also, this is a bathroom... shouldn't there be a toilet and sink? Also, if you're going to have a bathoom with a big screen tv, why not have a luxurious bathtub... a jacuzzi would be the shizznizzle yo ------------- |
Posted By: Garage Inc.
Date Posted: 20 July 2005 at 9:41pm
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Also, why is he/she, just standing there, even if you don't animate it, it should look like the person is doing something, like putting on the slippers or looking through the cabinet or something. For a first piece, great, but it could still use some work. ------------- For every second spent wondering if you can do something, you could spend 2 seconds doing it. |
Posted By: Monstara
Date Posted: 21 July 2005 at 6:35am
| Certainly make the screen flicker. Always works effectively :D |
Posted By: Shann
Date Posted: 21 July 2005 at 8:54am
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Originally posted by Saiklor
there's a funny visual thing going on with the shelf on the lefthand wall, it lines up precisely with the line of the floor and it makes my brain go "ahck!" maybe just move it up 1 pixel or down 1 pixel? or add something below it to make this optical illusion go away. oh i didnt realise it until u mentioned, thanks! |
Posted By: Shann
Date Posted: 21 July 2005 at 9:02am
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Originally posted by pixelblink
I completey agree with everyones comments so far. Also, this is a bathroom... shouldn't there be a toilet and sink? Also, if you're going to have a bathoom with a big screen tv, why not have a luxurious bathtub... a jacuzzi would be the shizznizzle yo yes thought of doing it as a jacuzzi actually, guess i have to work harder on it rather then just a tub... Why isnt there a toilet and sink? well.. my initial idea was that the bathtub/jacuzzi will actually replace the sofa in the room... so i didnt think there is a need for those. i think i need to do some major work to this, i'll think abt it or mebbe i can have another version of it with the toilet n sink. |
we'll see.... thanks!Posted By: Shann
Date Posted: 21 July 2005 at 9:05am
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Originally posted by Garage Inc.
Also, why is he/she, just standing there, even if you don't animate it, it should look like the person is doing something, like putting on the slippers or looking through the cabinet or something. For a first piece, great, but it could still use some work. Oh yes! I think i completely miss this point! Thanks for pointing out! |
Posted By: Shann
Date Posted: 21 July 2005 at 9:07am
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Originally posted by Monstara
Certainly make the screen flicker. Always works effectively :D Flicker? those noise/static effect? great idea thanks guys! |
Posted By: spymp3
Date Posted: 21 July 2005 at 4:06pm
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perfect for you first time!realy ------------- Pixel Area http://imageshack.us"> 
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Posted By: Monstara
Date Posted: 22 July 2005 at 1:00am
| yeah, I meant static. But if you like you can put in porn lol |