Gba mockup
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 26 February 2026 at 7:27pm
Topic: Gba mockup
Posted By: lil_lee
Subject: Gba mockup
Date Posted: 24 December 2007 at 4:51pm
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Hey all i made this gba mockup thing a while ago ,, i posted it for gallery but it needs revision so i was wonering what i should do... heres the pic of it...  |
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Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 24 December 2007 at 5:02pm
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over saturated colors doesn't do any justice for the desing of the pick. also, if you are using a black outline in the cross, why he rest hasn't got one? these gray buttons and the green outline you used blend with the case of the GBA, making them almost invisible. also, the overall jaggyness of the desing its another point that must be fixed. the readbility of the Gb advance text below the screen is almost zero, specially the advance part of it. in resume: its all about contrast, saturation and lineart. ------------- I ate leel's babies |
Posted By: lil_lee
Date Posted: 25 December 2007 at 9:41pm
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umm ok.. so the outlines and shadings! okey dokey off i go to mspaint |
Posted By: lil_lee
Date Posted: 25 December 2007 at 9:45pm
ye i sort of fixed stuff// also 2 different sizes!~ |
Posted By: micr0softener
Date Posted: 26 December 2007 at 1:11am
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You don't need to put multiple sizes- we can click to do that stuff. Also, the pink background is burning out my retinas. Anyhoo, isn't there some little writing next to the buttons on the left- just a shadow would be fine. |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 26 December 2007 at 7:54am
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no no no... look, you were wasting colors like mad. you had a new black for every single black piece on the gba, and you've picked a new color every time you had to use. i told you to discard that green ourilne arround the case of the console, it makes no sense. i told you to fix the jaggynes of the outlines of the case. but these are still badly shaped, and i find they aren't even simetrical. ok. i could suggest you a good reading in the tutorial section of the forums, so you can get arround with the basic concepts of saturation and contrast. also, i would recomend you to avoid working on such big pieces untill you can handle the very basics aspects of pixel art.  here's an edit for you. i've just take your palette from 50+ to 20 colors. study it, ------------- I ate leel's babies |
Posted By: lil_lee
Date Posted: 27 December 2007 at 12:26am
 heres my latest... i changed the color to a less brighter one... fixed up the game a bit and made it transparent...
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Posted By: Pixel-Dragon
Date Posted: 29 December 2007 at 12:30pm
Hmm, i can't really talk coz i'm a noob to but you should sort out the letters on the buttons man, they're barely visable. Keep trying thou, its coming along nicely 
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Posted By: greenraven
Date Posted: 29 December 2007 at 12:34pm
Oh there's no longer any point in posting in this topic Pixel-Dragon, lil_lee has been branded with the mark of evil (banned) for all eternity. 
-------------  "pwnage comes with patience, practice and planning." ~ Jalonso 
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