Sasuke
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 30 September 2025 at 3:34am
Topic: Sasuke
Posted By: hiddddde
Subject: Sasuke
Date Posted: 30 December 2007 at 12:48am
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Don't know what I'm doing because I'm making so many pixelarts and don't finish them....
This is a new one. Need some tips
 ~Hidde
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Posted By: Skull Master
Date Posted: 30 December 2007 at 1:48am
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O-o You're definately good for a newbie that hardly knows what he's doing! ^-^ I don't like the headband, though, I'm sure you'll get crits on that later on. Tip: Use a designated lightsource! I know it sounds like somthing a teacher would say, but it really does help! ^-^ ------------- 
leel: "At least I'm not claiming to a master in anything." lol, oops. Xp |
Posted By: hiddddde
Date Posted: 30 December 2007 at 1:53am
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Are the shadows wrong? |
Posted By: hiddddde
Date Posted: 30 December 2007 at 2:06am
What about this?
 I deleted the black outline and I putted an S on his headband |
Posted By: M.E.
Date Posted: 30 December 2007 at 2:41am
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Hello hidde, I had typed some critique and then my computer broke down. This was in my buffer: " Eyes use too much colors. I like the aura and the hair. The dagger can have nicer lines. I would change the gray color on the headband. (some sort of sweatband?) Maybe use the color from the pants? A bit of shadow at the ground can help in identifying if the left food (our right) is raised or not?! " You fixed the eyes. The headband is better, but I would ditch it all together. You have a better lightsource on the clothes and the hair, but you need to do the same on the skin. The lefthand side (his right) would have casted shadow from the hair on his face. The right arm (his left) needs to be much darker. The comment about the shadow on the floor still persist as it is a bit unclear what is happening with his feet. Hope these helps. Best regards from M.E. ------------- http://www.kunststukken.nl - KunstStukken.nl M.E. Art |
Posted By: hiddddde
Date Posted: 30 December 2007 at 3:14am
Do you mean more like this?
 And what about the headband. Should I change the colour of it to white? |
Posted By: M.E.
Date Posted: 30 December 2007 at 3:55am
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The best thing to do is to search for something to be used as a reference. This can be as simple as taking a doll and put a lamp on it. If the light comes from the left, the hair will be casting shadow to the face. Thus, the whole face will turn dark. If you don't have a real doll where you can add some kind of band around the head, you can consider googling for it. Usually the band will make the hair on the back flatter. Good luck! Best regards from M.E. ------------- http://www.kunststukken.nl - KunstStukken.nl M.E. Art |
Posted By: hiddddde
Date Posted: 30 December 2007 at 4:24am
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Don't get it..
M.E ben je nederlands?
Zou je dan mischien in het nederlands ff uit willen leggen en mischien een voorbeeld? |
Posted By: Reo
Date Posted: 30 December 2007 at 4:43am
quick edit on the headband:
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Posted By: hiddddde
Date Posted: 30 December 2007 at 4:51am
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reo you're super. I was trying to add that sign on the headband but it din't work. Thanks man!
At the moment I got this:  I changed his headband and, shadow of his hair and the scissors in his hand are now the problem |
Posted By: M.E.
Date Posted: 30 December 2007 at 6:31am
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Hi Hidde, Yes, I'm dutch. Look closely to the edit that Reo made. He made the band look round by adding some dark at the edges. I attempted to work with shadow to give the impression of the lifted leg, but I'm not sure if you even was aiming for that.  I tried working on the headband to angle it around the head. But maybe the hair would indeed cover it all. So they are scissors. Hmm .. that will be tough to make. The size would indicate that it is more like a plant-scissor than a scissor used in the office. Again, look for references and maybe take a scissor in your own hand and look in the mirror to see what happens. Hope this has helped. Best regards from M.E. ------------- http://www.kunststukken.nl - KunstStukken.nl M.E. Art |
Posted By: hiddddde
Date Posted: 01 January 2008 at 2:40am
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I wanna thank you all for the time to help me
This is what I made with a girlfriend of me
 And please take a look in this topic http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=5716&PID=84078#84078 - http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=5716&PID=84078#84078 |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 01 January 2008 at 9:20am
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hmm... I find strange that, even with the achieved anatomy and lineart you have with the other two characters(well, the middle one's face isn't that achieved at all) the first one's anatomy and lineart looks a weird. even for an SD, its general desing doesn't share the same quality with the other two. specially for those odd pants and legs you gave him. ------------- I ate leel's babies |