small character
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=5718
Printed Date: 26 February 2026 at 7:05pm
Topic: small character
Posted By: Feron
Subject: small character
Date Posted: 01 January 2008 at 4:35am
c&c?
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Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 01 January 2008 at 9:22am
leg's length appears to be unproportional to the torso's length. strange, considering the well achieved anatomy you got in the upper part of the body.
if references were used, would be a good idea to post them, in order to make comparisions easier.
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Posted By: Feron
Date Posted: 01 January 2008 at 9:45am
im not using a reference... is this any better?
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Posted By: Feron
Date Posted: 01 January 2008 at 10:50am

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Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 01 January 2008 at 11:25am
Wow the upper body looks great (welcome back btw) but the legs update is sort of a letdown tbh. The legs just seem.. what's the word.. sorta gummy? Looking up references doesn't mean you have to pick one and copy it exactly, just look at the position so you can better understand the shapes I guess.
Also I think you should go back to the boxers/shorts sketch - cause the spandex looking pant adds to the gummy bubbly look I think. And with the wide shorts you could have some awesome folds (like the diagonals on the crotch) and add a lot of interest to the piece.
But yes, hope to see more from you again ;)
Edit: p.s. he needs more of a butt
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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 01 January 2008 at 1:25pm
I still feel like I am not in the position to edit something like this, but I tought by my self: It can never really be wrong to post something, even if its bad..
I changed alot of things wrong, but maybe there is something thats right, and inspires you to do this yourself as well :)

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Posted By: Feron
Date Posted: 03 January 2008 at 4:55pm
lollige: wat a brilliant attitude.
http://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/28287.htm - http://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/28287.htm
calling it done now!
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