I AM finished :(
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 17 February 2026 at 1:17am
Topic: I AM finished :(
Posted By: Raven Studios
Subject: I AM finished :(
Date Posted: 20 August 2008 at 9:17pm
 I got sent a message saying that I should put this in the WIP forums, but it is finished. It is the first piece of pixel art I have ever made. |
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 21 August 2008 at 9:32am
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The message meant to say that a Mod found that it is not ready to be added to the gallery and needs fixing somehow. Some things I can suggest are: the yellow corner appears to be not pixelart the background is useless and has to be reoved. Use www.iaza.com or download giffy from the FAQ page in the main page. The shading on the red is toooooooo simple and can be improved. I will move to the WIP section for you. You are new so its ok to have to fix stuff you create even if you feel you are finished. This happens to everyone so its not personal. ------------- |
Posted By: Elwin
Date Posted: 21 August 2008 at 10:12am
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I'd suggest colouring the black lines and cutting down on some colors too |
Posted By: greenraven
Date Posted: 29 August 2008 at 9:45am
Everything has been said that needed to be be said. So I'll just say: Don't give up.  -------------  "pwnage comes with patience, practice and planning." ~ Jalonso 
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Posted By: PixelSpy
Date Posted: 29 August 2008 at 10:42am
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You could reduce the color count to at least 16 and there is also alot of shading you could add to this piece. Select a light source and do some shading.
Read this tutorial: http://members.cox.net/iconking/stoven/tutorials/02_ambient_sphere.html - Lighting Tutorial |