slug monster
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 30 September 2025 at 3:37am
Topic: slug monster
Posted By: dro man jerr
Subject: slug monster
Date Posted: 21 September 2008 at 10:19pm
 any cc on linework before i color? edit:  colored still have linework saved though |
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Posted By: Demon
Date Posted: 21 September 2008 at 10:53pm
 ------------- "At least we killed some boredom..." - Death Note. |
Posted By: dro man jerr
Date Posted: 21 September 2008 at 11:03pm
| um that dosn,t really help |
Posted By: Christoballs
Date Posted: 22 September 2008 at 12:41pm
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The coloured version looks like it dried up... The texture isn't right, either, because snail/slug skin is in tsacked lozenge shapes... and it needs to be moist =O |
Posted By: Souly
Date Posted: 22 September 2008 at 1:55pm
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Originally posted by dro man jerr um that dosn,t really help That example helps a lot. Here are some of your failures. 1) You began patterning WAY before you even had volume. 2) What is with the outline? 3) The example shows proper shading on the belly, it shows contrast as well. 4) I like the line art more then what you have done with the new version. I suggest you start over, take your colors and just putting them on solid. Until you've got your volumes figured out don't even dither or pattern ever. It's just bad practice, and you don't want to start off learning to do it all wrong. :/ ------------- 
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Posted By: Souly
Date Posted: 22 September 2008 at 2:13pm
 3 minute crap edit. -------------
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