[WIP] Phone
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 18 March 2026 at 9:11pm
Topic: [WIP] Phone
Posted By: TheFox
Subject: [WIP] Phone
Date Posted: 22 November 2008 at 1:08pm
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Hello everyone, I am quite new to pixel art and find one of the things I struggle most with, is actually finishing my pieces. I lack patience when it comes to pixel art so I decided that I was going to start a piece and actually finish it. Unfortunately it is not going well at all. But that's ok, I will probably learn a lot :D Anyways, I have gone several different directions and cannot figure out where to go with it: This first one was a basic outline, not really sure if I should still go with it or not, I might shape up the outline, I might not, not really sure. http://imageshack.us">  This second one was a bit of coloring with the same outline( I think the top portion turned out ok actually): http://imageshack.us">  Some more coloring: http://imageshack.us">  A new angle and lighting direction: http://imageshack.us">  I really have no idea how to make any of these look good. Please help :( |
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Posted By: Damian
Date Posted: 24 November 2008 at 11:53pm
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I would comment on this but I don't know where you are going with this.
Please to help other members, post a reference picture so that we no what and how we can help you to get the best out of this piece. ------------- |
Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 30 November 2008 at 3:00am
| You really need more straight lines here than the curvy ones. Also, you're pillowshading, which isn't usually advises. Visit the Resources section and look up the n00btorials. |
Posted By: ellie-is
Date Posted: 30 November 2008 at 7:31am
| You are also using too many colors and to little contrast. |