Hi!!
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=7515
Printed Date: 23 April 2026 at 8:44am
Topic: Hi!!
Posted By: Kage no Shinigami
Subject: Hi!!
Date Posted: 12 December 2008 at 9:57am
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HI! I'm new to the forum and the site
I come here to show this WIP of mine I have been working on it for 2 nights already! Just wanted a few opinions. PS: All logos were hand made by me...(well, they're property of several companies, but the isometric view was made by me) The structure of the house was based on this http://gas13.ru/v3/tutorials/isometric_pixelart_tutorial_isometric_house.php - tutorial in my first night. But after a few hours i felt confident and started making the sign(GAME), the pacman, the space invader and the logos(Nintendo, SEGA, and Atari).....what do you think of it? 
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Posted By: Damian
Date Posted: 12 December 2008 at 10:14am
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Looks ok....you look like you have a nack for iso :)
colours are nice especially for a first? well keep looking at tutorials every now and then as you learn new things every time!(this is something allot of begginers don't do and after a year or two the end up like Mr greenraven :kwl but not an overall good pixel artist :P No offence dude) oh and patients is key! I'm still busy with something I did 5 days ago :P ------------- |
Posted By: Kage no Shinigami
Date Posted: 12 December 2008 at 10:19am
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thanks! what do you think of the logos?
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Posted By: Damian
Date Posted: 12 December 2008 at 10:35am
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There extremely good!
i don't like iso that much(cause I suck at it :P and havent really tried). Maybe somebody with iso knowledge could tell you more. I also suggest that you look at the "hall of fame" gallery and download the pic and look closely how those guys did things. So yeah others work is always a good reference as long as your making your own concept and they both look nothing alike. Edit: Why not play with this some more and make your own building :) be creative as at the moment it is a picture done looking at a tutorial with a few edits and things added. So I'm not asking, I'm demanding that you show your creativity :P . I think other members would also like to see what you can think of. practice practice practice.(oh its nice to see other 16 year olds on here :) ) ------------- |
Posted By: asukicco
Date Posted: 12 December 2008 at 10:42am
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Logos are the best part of this piece, indeed ;) But don't dwell on logos, learn from Jalonso how to improve you iso skill in every aspects :)
Keep up the good work. ------------- |
Posted By: Kage no Shinigami
Date Posted: 12 December 2008 at 10:53am
| thnaks...... |
Posted By: Kage no Shinigami
Date Posted: 12 December 2008 at 10:54am
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i'm not really 16.....i'm a just and a half away of turning 17 =p lol
Iso rocks.........glad you like the logos! I have in mind an idea.......it's kinda of a continuation of this project! basically a ginarmous building, the concept is like this game house, but the logos and the signs are are more and trying to make them better too! I'll practice =P I've also just moments ago, redone the space invader.now it's better! |
Posted By: Damian
Date Posted: 12 December 2008 at 11:14am
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Your born in 1992....your 16 :P And thats that!
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Posted By: Kage no Shinigami
Date Posted: 12 December 2008 at 11:28am
| lol! okok! but in 2009 i'll still be 17! xD |
Posted By: Damian
Date Posted: 12 December 2008 at 1:04pm
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SO WILL I!!! lol
Back on topic :) You better get back to your idea. ------------- |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 12 December 2008 at 9:46pm
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I think its pretty good. The only thing for me that makes this kinda weak is the color choices. This much saturation of colors does not seem to feel right for the subject matter. It may however just be the roof being too 'loud'.
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Posted By: geminoid
Date Posted: 12 December 2008 at 10:10pm
| I think your surfaces could really use some texture. |
Posted By: Kage no Shinigami
Date Posted: 13 December 2008 at 4:05am
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Originally posted by jalonso
I think its pretty good. The only thing for me that makes this kinda weak is the color choices. This much saturation of colors does not seem to feel right for the subject matter. It may however just be the roof being too 'loud'. Originally posted by geminoid
I think your surfaces could really use some texture. thanks! now that you mentioned it, I think so aswell! i'll try to come upwith a more realistic palette, and some textures! |
Posted By: Kage no Shinigami
Date Posted: 14 December 2008 at 9:09am
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this is the LIDL in fron of my house.....as you can see: far from finished! =P
lol------it only has one day work, so... it only has reached this far but i think it's not bad!! meh, what can i say.....i'm a beginner, so...that's why i'm asking for opinions! 
I know i know........there's a lot of stuff missing btw, the logo.....i'll later try to emprove it =P dont be too rough on the critics
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Posted By: kwigbo
Date Posted: 14 December 2008 at 12:52pm
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I would suggest improving on your first piece before moving to something so large. I agree with the need for more texture. Imperfections in the walls (cracks, dirt, etc). Also the pac man could use some depth. Right now it looks too paper thin and not very realistic for the depth of a sign. Simply making it as thick as the GAME sign would look better. I like the small piece much better it has more character to it. Keep up the good work. ------------- http://www.kwigbo.com"> 
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 14 December 2008 at 12:55pm
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This second is far too big to be very interesting, me thinks. You have to keep scale in mind with everything you draw. Are the cars in this world as wide as a door? o.O ------------- |
Posted By: Kage no Shinigami
Date Posted: 14 December 2008 at 1:25pm
| No, those small spaces at the front of the doors aren't for parking. those blue doors are emrgency exits! ^_^' lol |
Posted By: Kage no Shinigami
Date Posted: 14 December 2008 at 1:28pm
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Originally posted by kwigbo
I would suggest improving on your first piece before moving to something so large. I agree with the need for more texture. Imperfections in the walls (cracks, dirt, etc). Also the pac man could use some depth. Right now it looks too paper thin and not very realistic for the depth of a sign. Simply making it as thick as the GAME sign would look better. I like the small piece much better it has more character to it. Keep up the good work. I'm going to reamke it........not so small, but not as big as this LIDL lol. basically an entire remake, but before that i wanted to try something else, because i really want to my Game House to be really great, so.......i think i'll delay it untili get some more experience...^_^ |