Super Deformed template
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Topic: Super Deformed template
Posted By: ellie-is
Subject: Super Deformed template
Date Posted: 16 January 2009 at 1:54pm
Any crit before I start doing poses/characters? Crit on the shape of the whole thing is welcome. Shading/aa on the body will changing according to the clothes the character wears, so thats not really needed I think. |
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Posted By: kwigbo
Date Posted: 16 January 2009 at 2:48pm
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The head shape and the legs look good. It seems as though the torso should be shorter though. ------------- http://www.kwigbo.com"> 
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Posted By: ellie-is
Date Posted: 16 January 2009 at 2:57pm
| I dunno. The head is already 1/2 the whole thing. If I make the body even smaller, the head would look too big. Maybe when I cover it up with clothes it wont look that big? =/ |
Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 16 January 2009 at 3:43pm
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Usually, a too big head is not a problem, but now the body just does not match up with the non cartoony styled legs. If you would make a very cartoony thing of it, it might be possible to go with these legs, but still its a bit weird. I suggest making that body smaller too. The head size is ok ------------- |
Posted By: ellie-is
Date Posted: 16 January 2009 at 3:55pm
I see. How about it now? |
Posted By: skooba-dude
Date Posted: 16 January 2009 at 5:27pm
a quick edit cause I thought his left arm looked a bit strange, ignore the colours, I changed around some lines, added a 6pak 4 fun-lol, hope it helps.------------- 
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Posted By: ellie-is
Date Posted: 16 January 2009 at 6:11pm
Thanks, I edited it and I agree it looks a lot better. |
Posted By: kwigbo
Date Posted: 16 January 2009 at 7:10pm
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Much better. ------------- http://www.kwigbo.com">
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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 17 January 2009 at 2:21am
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I agree with that too. ------------- |
Posted By: ellie-is
Date Posted: 17 January 2009 at 7:10am
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Ok, thanks guys. Anything else or should I start animating? EDIT: Tried a warrior like dude.  I am happy with the face, but I feel the armor could be way better. Any tips? |
Posted By: kwigbo
Date Posted: 17 January 2009 at 1:00pm
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Armor is usually shinny. This doesn't really look shiny. You might want to just brighten up the lightest shade in the armor. ------------- http://www.kwigbo.com">
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Posted By: ellie-is
Date Posted: 17 January 2009 at 1:14pm
Didnt look good. Added another color, still not entirely happy with it =/ EDIT:  Maybe the hair looks better like this? |
Posted By: skooba-dude
Date Posted: 18 January 2009 at 5:25pm
quick edit on the armor, I think I was able to give it a bit of a shine, I seperated the pant leggings so they are more like armor less like shorts.
edit: oh I also enlarged the shoulder pads a bit, you can put them back to the size they were if you want, sorry I forgot to make background transp. -------------
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Posted By: kwigbo
Date Posted: 18 January 2009 at 5:37pm
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That's exactly what I was talking about skooba-dude. I think the brighter hair looked a little better. ------------- http://www.kwigbo.com">
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