creaturething[]small piece, crits please
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 19 December 2025 at 11:21am
Topic: creaturething[]small piece, crits please
Posted By: skeddles
Subject: creaturething[]small piece, crits please
Date Posted: 21 January 2009 at 4:16pm
 I did the head first and it came out pretty good, but I don't think the body is as good. Any ideas on how to make it not suck? ------------- |
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Posted By: DezireSoft
Date Posted: 21 January 2009 at 4:40pm
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10/10!!! o.O Dude, amazing.. I love it. I see no problems, you can actually use that for whatever, it's great, keep it that way.
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Posted By: Evilagram
Date Posted: 21 January 2009 at 4:44pm
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Some of the shading on the body around the legs is a tad rigid compared to the dithering in other places, creating a harsh division between highlight and shadow. Otherwise I think the thing is amazing. I'm definitely going to have a close look at some of the finer elements of the shading. |
Posted By: Slemboll
Date Posted: 24 January 2009 at 11:29am
| one thing you can do is a leash in the dogs mouth that would be pretty cool otherwise its awesome |
Posted By: Platnium
Date Posted: 24 January 2009 at 2:14pm
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The hair needs a bit more contrast, also add some dithering on the dark shade on the stomach. ------------- 
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