mock up needs work
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Topic: mock up needs work
Posted By: TMH
Subject: mock up needs work
Date Posted: 23 January 2009 at 10:16am
 i need to put something in the sky but what??? |
Replies:
Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 23 January 2009 at 12:42pm
i added some back ground what else do i need c+c plz |
Posted By: Platnium
Date Posted: 23 January 2009 at 3:03pm
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The ground seems to be high up, I would make it lower down. Maybe add a sun in the sky? ------------- 
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Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 23 January 2009 at 4:10pm
| well the ground is so high because there will be lower ledges and no higher ones, but i will add a sun |
Posted By: mechast
Date Posted: 23 January 2009 at 4:25pm
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the ground is too empty, and takes too much of the pic. and that red+blue lightning thingy burns my eyes. And also first i thought that there are outline problems, but when I zoomed in, i realised that those are tussocks. Those are hard to see. Also you should replace the black outlines with dark colours. Apart from these this mockup is pretty funny, and i think it will look very pretty, when you complete it.  |
Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 23 January 2009 at 4:34pm
 i added a sun but i dont like how it turned out any tips? edit i didn't see that post and i will work on those things |
Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 23 January 2009 at 5:34pm
alright i added some stuff 
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Posted By: Evilagram
Date Posted: 23 January 2009 at 9:00pm
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Dither out the sky for a smoother transition, especially the bright bottom part. The Green lighting is a tad too solid for my tastes, but it definitely fits the style of the piece Given that the light source is from the back, the shading here makes absolutely no sense. Try making highlights similar to how you'd make shadows, curving around the edges, with the strongest points being closest to the sun. If it helps you, then try shading the highlight from a lightsource in the opposite direction, then flip the shadows and highlights. |
Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 24 January 2009 at 6:55am
| yeaaa i was going for the light comeing from the lightning and then someone said to add a sun and i got all screwed up so i think im takeing it out and dithering the sky |
Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 24 January 2009 at 7:27am
 k i got rid of the sun added dithering and the light source is... (drum roll) the lightning |