[Rk] - Alien WIP
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Topic: [Rk] - Alien WIP
Posted By: RollerKingdom
Subject: [Rk] - Alien WIP
Date Posted: 28 January 2009 at 2:28pm
 I would like some critics and suggestions |
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Posted By: Quake
Date Posted: 28 January 2009 at 2:32pm
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you've already made a topic about this.. Please look before ]: |
Posted By: RollerKingdom
Date Posted: 28 January 2009 at 2:35pm
| OO my bad i though i did it in other forumm =S |
Posted By: Dr. Grammer
Date Posted: 28 January 2009 at 3:16pm
I'm not good enough to comment on the pixel side but from the view of a everyday person I think the foot looks kinda weird. It just seems way too rounded on the back. An example of what I think it should look more like. You can ignore this post if you disagree. ------------- Misspelled name is on purpose. |
Posted By: RollerKingdom
Date Posted: 28 January 2009 at 4:11pm
| thank you so much ill edit this right now! |
Posted By: CrisNMP
Date Posted: 28 January 2009 at 5:00pm
| You also overdid the anti aliasing. I can see it at 100% |
Posted By: RollerKingdom
Date Posted: 28 January 2009 at 5:02pm
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Thanks for the tips Cris ill decrease it here's my new update  |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 29 January 2009 at 2:32am
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you main problem is basically anatomy. if your character isnt made of jelly, then you need to give him bones, a structure, etc. if you're aiming for a humanoid look, then use a human reference for this. and if you cant find the exact same pose, then you can always use multiple references to complete the image. for example, the torso resembles a swimmer, while the lower is a basic walking stance.
------------- I ate leel's babies |
Posted By: RollerKingdom
Date Posted: 29 January 2009 at 4:26am
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Originally posted by Metaru you main problem is basically anatomy. if your character isnt made of jelly, then you need to give him bones, a structure, etc. if you're aiming for a humanoid look, then use a human reference for this. and if you cant find the exact same pose, then you can always use multiple references to complete the image. for example, the torso resembles a swimmer, while the lower is a basic walking stance. Thanks for the tips but at this point could you point out what is mainly wrong on the anatomy? and since it was an alien i thought it didn't look that bad. but i am here for critics so yup. |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 29 January 2009 at 10:43am
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Originally posted by RollerKingdom Thanks for the tips but at this point could you point out what is mainly wrong on the anatomy? everything ------------- I ate leel's babies |
Posted By: CrisNMP
Date Posted: 29 January 2009 at 12:21pm
Apart from anatomy, I still think you should fix the AA.  |
Posted By: RollerKingdom
Date Posted: 29 January 2009 at 12:34pm
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Well metaru so i don't have an idea where to start and like how to fix.. so by just saying everything doesn't help that much.. and thanks crisnmp |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 29 January 2009 at 1:03pm
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Originally posted by Metaru you main problem is basically anatomy. if your character isnt made of jelly, then you need to give him bones, a structure, etc. if you're aiming for a humanoid look, then use a human reference for this. and if you cant find the exact same pose, then you can always use multiple references to complete the image. for example, the torso resembles a swimmer, while the lower is a basic walking stance. ------------- I ate leel's babies |