comic
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 28 October 2025 at 9:06am
Topic: comic
Posted By: TMH
Subject: comic
Date Posted: 23 February 2009 at 6:30pm
 i know very weak. im no good at funny |
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Posted By: RollerKingdom
Date Posted: 23 February 2009 at 6:33pm
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I like the characters and the their shadin :P but what is that white outline where the word BAM is.? |
Posted By: Riboflavin
Date Posted: 23 February 2009 at 6:36pm
| I love the main character, so no nitpicks there, but, like RollerKingdom mentioned, the shape in the first frame looks quite phallic... and I have no idea what it's supposed to be. I don't fully understand what happens after "BAM" |
Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 23 February 2009 at 9:45pm
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edges on the lamp are much too soft, banding on the word "BAM" needs to go. Not sure why the second character has lines across his face.
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Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 24 February 2009 at 4:14am
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his head is stuck in the water thing @ ribo the guy gets his head stuck in the watter thing ------------- |
Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 24 February 2009 at 5:22pm
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Well without seeing it in a previous panel it's a bit odd. If it's a watercooler, then it should be more of a cylinder.
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Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 24 February 2009 at 5:29pm
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yea... i might put him lookin up into it :S ?!? edit i changed it to what no cure said  ------------- |
Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 24 February 2009 at 6:45pm
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I still think that's an oddly spherical watercooler.
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Posted By: Riboflavin
Date Posted: 24 February 2009 at 8:41pm
| Yeah, I agree with ThereIsNoCure; the watercooler should be more rectangular. Also, when I think of a watercooler sucking up someone's head, I think of more of a "phump"/suction-y sound, not "bam" |
Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 25 February 2009 at 4:18am
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ye, isee yur guys point. i can make it happen ;P pow:  ------------- |
Posted By: Platnium
Date Posted: 25 February 2009 at 11:23am
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At first I didn't know what it said, took me about 5-10 secs to figure it out, try making it more readable. ------------- 
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Posted By: Evilagram
Date Posted: 25 February 2009 at 6:10pm
| The bam was easily readable. I only knew it was a, "thunk", out of intuition, then carefully deciphering the letters. |
Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 26 February 2009 at 4:16am
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yea ill change that
edit:  i got rid of the wird lines in the letters and i dunno do you think it should be bigger or what?------------- |
Posted By: E-Bomb
Date Posted: 26 February 2009 at 1:49pm
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It's very hard to tell that it's a W, I had to zoom in to see what it was. And probably you should make a background. |
Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 26 February 2009 at 3:15pm
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Just take out that green outline
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Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 26 February 2009 at 3:24pm
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i didnt but a bg because it would take atention away from the comic. i will fix the words ------------- |