Smooth Dancer
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 23 April 2026 at 5:55am
Topic: Smooth Dancer
Posted By: Slemsvamp.
Subject: Smooth Dancer
Date Posted: 29 March 2009 at 8:50am
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I just made someting black for practising my AA on, but then all of a sudden I saw a torso, and.. yeah, typical me. The anatomy is quite alright(?) but I can't get the colours right however. Anything else that looks off? Let me know! I'm thinking about adding a collar to him aswell.  |
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Posted By: Slemboll
Date Posted: 30 March 2009 at 10:51am
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du kan ju göra den lite rolig och lägga till en slips och kanske en liten cigarr eller nått liknande dock ser färgerna konstiga ut på magen för "spetsigt" |
Posted By: Slemsvamp.
Date Posted: 31 March 2009 at 3:25am
Thinking about making a crowd in the background. He'll probably get a collar or a bow tie, perhaps both? |
Posted By: vampireslug
Date Posted: 31 March 2009 at 3:48am
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I think a collar would work but a bowtie, with the red shirt... I'd have to see it. I'm loving what you have so far though, nice lines on the body. ------------- "The Earth starts to rumble, world powers fall. A 'warring for the heavens, a peaceful man stands tall...." - Mustaine. ©1992 Screen Gems/EMI |
Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 31 March 2009 at 4:10am
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i think you should get rid of the outlin of the hat
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Posted By: Slemsvamp.
Date Posted: 31 March 2009 at 6:02am
Collar coming up!
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Posted By: Slemsvamp.
Date Posted: 31 March 2009 at 7:41am
More details..
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Posted By: Slemboll
Date Posted: 31 March 2009 at 11:07am
| it looks really good but why put a crowd in the back ?? who dances with the back to the crowd unless hes gonna turn around |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 31 March 2009 at 12:51pm
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you have such a defined light source, and you're totally ingnoring it in the shirt. use stronger highlights, since its wquite an strong lightsource the one you're placing over your object. don't be afraid to use more saturated colors on tha cane. ------------- I ate leel's babies |
Posted By: Slemsvamp.
Date Posted: 31 March 2009 at 5:43pm
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Originally posted by Slemboll it looks really good but why put a crowd in the back ?? who dances with the back to the crowd unless hes gonna turn around Yes, I've been thinking about it, but I'd like to refine the main character a little before I start doing such details. Originally posted by Metaru you have such a defined light source, and you're totally ingnoring it in the shirt. use stronger highlights, since its wquite an strong lightsource the one you're placing over your object. don't be afraid to use more saturated colors on tha cane. I know I know! I'll try so squeeze another colour in, or at least replace one. And the cane is just a placeholder, for you to get an idea of what direction I'm heading. Thanks a lot! |