wip - the harbour
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 30 September 2025 at 2:03am
Topic: wip - the harbour
Posted By: Spirou
Subject: wip - the harbour
Date Posted: 29 March 2009 at 3:30pm
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the harbour start: http://nsa06.casimages.com/img/2009/03/29/090329100142672373.png 1 hour afterwards http://www.casimages.com">   
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Posted By: Spirou
Date Posted: 30 March 2009 at 3:35pm
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first groundless building nor fair figure texture http://www.casimages.com">  |
Posted By: vampireslug
Date Posted: 31 March 2009 at 3:24am
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Wow, great texture... keep going! ------------- "The Earth starts to rumble, world powers fall. A 'warring for the heavens, a peaceful man stands tall...." - Mustaine. ©1992 Screen Gems/EMI |
Posted By: r1k
Date Posted: 31 March 2009 at 5:25am
looks great so far, but I think you could use some more contrast and make the shadow areas darker. Especially on the blue roof part cause that part you cant really see the shadow. The red tiling has good contrast Id just like to see it elsewhere too. Here is a not very good edit I did for you to see it with a little more contrast (ya I know I sort of made it look like there are vines growing on it by mistake) |
Posted By: Spirou
Date Posted: 31 March 2009 at 7:53am
| vous cinder reason I go more contrasting thank you |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 31 March 2009 at 12:55pm
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that building already has over 30 colors. watch out.
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Posted By: Spirou
Date Posted: 01 April 2009 at 6:57am
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thank you metaru I had not pointed out dope reduces colour. http://www.casimages.com">  |
Posted By: vampireslug
Date Posted: 01 April 2009 at 7:26am
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The grey bricks seem flat but I really like what you did on the ground in front of the two closed doors... really nice texture. ------------- "The Earth starts to rumble, world powers fall. A 'warring for the heavens, a peaceful man stands tall...." - Mustaine. ©1992 Screen Gems/EMI |
Posted By: r1k
Date Posted: 01 April 2009 at 8:33am
| the area between the first building you colored and the one with the rounded top is becoming a little problematic, the shadow on the round thing is kind of melding with the shadow behind it, you need to do something to pop that rounded top building out from the stuff behind it. You still seem a little hesitant about contrast in some places and some of the darker areas namely the red tiles and black rails on the windows seem a little out of place because of it. Looks good though, could just use a little tweaking in my opinion. |
Posted By: Spirou
Date Posted: 01 April 2009 at 2:25pm
http://www.casimages.com"> my creation in her even has 28 colour but has reason of the building
quotes is of thing quotes it makes 50 colour but has the end my
creation shall not have 35 more than colour
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Posted By: vampireslug
Date Posted: 02 April 2009 at 2:24am
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The lines in the water make it look like the walls of a deep pit - it looks like that little circle is just hanging over emptyness - maybe break up some of the lines a little, I'm not sure how to explain it really I just know it looks odd.
I like what you did with the palm trees, not a palette choice I would have expected but it really works. ------------- "The Earth starts to rumble, world powers fall. A 'warring for the heavens, a peaceful man stands tall...." - Mustaine. ©1992 Screen Gems/EMI |
Posted By: Peach
Date Posted: 02 April 2009 at 4:24am
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I would have used a greener tone for the palm. top roofs are way too dark imho. here's a ref for buildings (from Afghanistan) http://inapcache.boston.com/universal/site_graphics/blogs/bigpicture/afghan_04_01/a01_18330419.jpg - http://inapcache.boston.com/universal/site_graphics/blogs/bigpicture/afghan_04_01/a01_18330419.jpg |