first sprite like in a month or two
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Topic: first sprite like in a month or two
Posted By: Mabelma
Subject: first sprite like in a month or two
Date Posted: 07 May 2009 at 6:24am
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So I took a month of to learn to draw and I know I haven't finish the month but I bought my self a tablet and I did this cherries things and I was looking for some c+c to know if I have improved in some way.
Thanks in advance.
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Posted By: Mabelma
Date Posted: 13 May 2009 at 4:52pm
 Forget about the gay cherries up there and C+C this.Thanks Guys I hope I have learned something.Anyways I know I need to refine the clouds,rocks, ground and celtic spiral and add some color but tell me if I should continue. I'm doing it for some practice. I hope you guys like it.
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Posted By: Mabelma
Date Posted: 14 May 2009 at 12:52pm
Newest update on the sprite. Come on guys please give me some C+C I really need it.
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Posted By: CommanderD97
Date Posted: 14 May 2009 at 6:36pm
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CRAZY:
no shading on the sword, needs shading, give it some shading, yeah!
seriously:
it looks to edgey
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Posted By: BK!
Date Posted: 14 May 2009 at 7:37pm
Yeah, it would look much better if the blade was the same on both sides, it looks dented on the one side.(if you did this on purpose, you may want to rethink it beacause it looks as if you made a mistake. )
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Posted By: Mabelma
Date Posted: 15 May 2009 at 10:48am
| Are you talking about the handle Bk!? I'll shade it later I'm getting the lineart and the composition ready right now. I'll shade it later. |