For revision;... Emo guitar player
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Topic: For revision;... Emo guitar player
Posted By: purpletree
Subject: For revision;... Emo guitar player
Date Posted: 09 May 2009 at 4:13pm
 Sent back for revision...But I might not go on with it, maybe start a new piece.... Maybe I should animate it???? C&C really needed :O) |
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Posted By: tripnfelt
Date Posted: 10 May 2009 at 7:09am
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It looks very flat - it needs more shading, The purple outline doesn't have enough contrast - try a darker color for it. Try hair texture on the hair to make it look like hair. Give him clothes and things - he is large enough to show more detail. Make the bg color transparent. Interesting guitar is it a casio dg-20? |
Posted By: Walrus
Date Posted: 10 May 2009 at 7:22am
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why do you waste so much colors on the outlines?
oh and emos have clothes too.
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Posted By: purpletree
Date Posted: 11 May 2009 at 3:39am
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yeah, i was trying to go with the casio dg-20 looks.... hmmm so maybe i should ditch the lines?? and aa it maybe.?? heres the version without the lines.... and different colour  |
Posted By: Reo
Date Posted: 12 May 2009 at 7:01am
 Here is an edit Decide whatever your gonna go with outlines or not, If one thing has outlines and another doesn't it usually looks bad. I don't think the cut quite works at this size. Keep up the work/ Reo |
Posted By: Di0xygen
Date Posted: 12 May 2009 at 7:03am
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Great edit reo, pretty much sums up what i was about to explain, thanks for saving me the trouble :P ------------- c==3 |
Posted By: purpletree
Date Posted: 14 May 2009 at 3:53am
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thats an awesome edt, so.... I;m going to start from the beginning...  LInes first... having trouble with the face and the actual guitar shape.. it looks like a drumstick right now :P |
Posted By: purpletree
Date Posted: 17 May 2009 at 5:42am
studied Reo's (awesome) edit... Here's the head and the shoes i made... |
Posted By: ellie-is
Date Posted: 17 May 2009 at 6:07am
| Any reason for JPG? |
Posted By: purpletree
Date Posted: 18 May 2009 at 3:10pm
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ooh is it jpg.... sorry oops.... EDIT: it was actually bmp i think...  heres the proper one  |