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For revision;... Emo guitar player

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Topic: For revision;... Emo guitar player
Posted By: purpletree
Subject: For revision;... Emo guitar player
Date Posted: 09 May 2009 at 4:13pm
Sent back for revision...

But I might not go on with it, maybe start a new piece....
Maybe I should animate it????

C&C really needed :O)



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Posted By: tripnfelt
Date Posted: 10 May 2009 at 7:09am
It looks very flat - it needs more shading,

The purple outline doesn't have enough contrast - try a darker color for it.

Try hair texture on the hair to make it look like hair.

Give him clothes and things - he is large enough to show more detail.

Make the bg color transparent.

Interesting guitar is it a casio dg-20?


Posted By: Walrus
Date Posted: 10 May 2009 at 7:22am
why do you waste so much colors on the outlines?
oh and emos have clothes too.


Posted By: purpletree
Date Posted: 11 May 2009 at 3:39am
yeah, i was trying to go with the casio dg-20 looks....

hmmm so maybe i should ditch the lines?? and aa it maybe.??

heres the version without the lines.... and different colour



Posted By: Reo
Date Posted: 12 May 2009 at 7:01am

Here is an edit
Decide whatever your gonna go with outlines or not, If one thing has outlines and another doesn't it usually looks bad.
I don't think the cut quite works at this size.
Keep up the work/ Reo


Posted By: Di0xygen
Date Posted: 12 May 2009 at 7:03am
Great edit reo, pretty much sums up what i was about to explain, thanks for saving me the trouble :P




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Posted By: purpletree
Date Posted: 14 May 2009 at 3:53am
thats an awesome edt, so....
I;m going to start from the beginning...

LInes first... having trouble with the face and the actual guitar shape.. it looks like a drumstick right now :P


Posted By: purpletree
Date Posted: 17 May 2009 at 5:42am
studied Reo's (awesome) edit...

Here's the head and the shoes i made...


Posted By: ellie-is
Date Posted: 17 May 2009 at 6:07am
Any reason for JPG?


Posted By: purpletree
Date Posted: 18 May 2009 at 3:10pm
ooh is it jpg.... sorry
oops....

EDIT: it was actually bmp i think...

heres the proper one



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