Stoned Stone
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 19 December 2025 at 11:20am
Topic: Stoned Stone
Posted By: Hytosys
Subject: Stoned Stone
Date Posted: 10 May 2009 at 5:05pm
 Just noticed I need to change some of those black lines to dark gray...some of the shadings/highlights are really cheap and need to be fixed up, but I think it's looking alright other than that. C&C?  |
Replies:
Posted By: ZeroFive1
Date Posted: 10 May 2009 at 7:47pm
| The piece is rather large, so I think it would be great if you added more detail. For example, scratches and small dents here and there. At this point the shading is pretty boring and unexciting. |
Posted By: Di0xygen
Date Posted: 12 May 2009 at 8:25am
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Well first thing first.. the peice is waaaaaaay too large. you have about 90% flat colored pixels. also the lineart is good, but its too black and makes the peice flat. I would suggest reducing the size to about 2 times smaller and give it a more defined shading. And as zerofive said, maybe more details like dent and scratches Here a small edit I did. Kind of went crazy with it, and theres millions of errors, simply to show you how much easier it is to work on a smaller scale  ------------- c==3 |
Posted By: Hytosys
Date Posted: 13 May 2009 at 5:46pm
| Hahaha, that's some really awesome work. Thanks for the pointers, both of you. |