space ship WIP
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 27 October 2025 at 2:22am
Topic: space ship WIP
Posted By: minipuck
Subject: space ship WIP
Date Posted: 09 June 2009 at 9:10am
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i need loads of help on this one, it just keeps looking flat >.<. Any tips, suggestions, critics would be greatly appreciated. i know not everything is shaded, but the parts i have shaded are still flat.   edit: i know the color count is too high i just noticed, i will need to fix that too, increase some contrasts, remove some colors. ------------- http://dragcave.net/viewdragon/G3eW"> 
please click it, otherwise it will die, and it seems special. |
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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 09 June 2009 at 9:42am
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In most cases it is because your ship design actually seems to be flat too. It might help to draw a silhouette or so from how your ship would look like from top. ------------- |
Posted By: minipuck
Date Posted: 10 June 2009 at 8:41am
okay i gave up on the old design and made a new design, somewhat like one of the examples, i will change the pallete, and im not done shading yet, but i'd really like some C&C ------------- http://dragcave.net/viewdragon/G3eW">
please click it, otherwise it will die, and it seems special. |
Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 10 June 2009 at 12:00pm
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again, how does it look from top? where are the wings, how wide are they and how do they look?
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