NPA: gogo digital art!
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=8755
Printed Date: 23 October 2025 at 5:34am
Topic: NPA: gogo digital art!
Posted By: Tarenken
Subject: NPA: gogo digital art!
Date Posted: 11 July 2009 at 9:48pm
aka 'Flowers for Algernon'. Might change the title if it's infringing copyright or anything haha It's a WIP, obviously, but I don't know where to go from here. Are there any good tutorials online about adding detail? Like, realistic detail? Everything I see skimps over the part, all the tuts just say 'add detail blablah' and leave my high and dry when it comes to that part. I think the shark looks cool though. Anyways. I'd like to know what you think/if there are any major errors. I tend to only use a couple layers to save on space/blend easier, but I'm starting to regret my decision. |
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Posted By: bonehead11
Date Posted: 12 July 2009 at 1:48am
| It looks interesting but I dont think its pixel art... |
Posted By: minipuck
Date Posted: 12 July 2009 at 2:03am
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bothered reading the titel it says NPA: non pixel art, it also says digital art. hmm all the faces seem a bit blurry compared to the bug's face. ------------- http://dragcave.net/viewdragon/G3eW"> 
please click it, otherwise it will die, and it seems special. |
Posted By: Tarenken
Date Posted: 12 July 2009 at 10:51am
 rethought the composition but can't think of where to put the black-cloaked figure. D: |
Posted By: Quake
Date Posted: 12 July 2009 at 11:58am
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maybe try conceptart instead of here since it's NPA. Looks nice though. |
Posted By: AngelOTG
Date Posted: 12 July 2009 at 12:42pm
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Yeah, you're more likely to get better help over on ConceptArt since they specialize in this type of art. :3 But, it looks like it has a lot of potential! :D |
Posted By: Tarenken
Date Posted: 12 July 2009 at 1:13pm
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This actually is on conceptart haha. :P Getting some decent crit here but it doesn't hurt to post it multiple places amirite? |
Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 12 July 2009 at 2:45pm
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There's nothing wrong with this being NPA, this isn't a strictly pixel art forum. if you have to include the black-robed figure, perhaps put him between two existing figures, just make sure you balance that composition with something on the other side. not much to comment on at this early stage, other than it's overall a bit blurry, but hopefully the final product will have a crispness to it. |
Posted By: Tarenken
Date Posted: 12 July 2009 at 3:58pm
 the bird looks bad. Like, really bad. I looked at reference pictures of birds and cloaks... what am I doing wrong? |
Posted By: Psychotic_Carp
Date Posted: 12 July 2009 at 5:11pm
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beak too high and small? -------------  got game?
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