WIP Need help >.< *updated*
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Topic: WIP Need help >.< *updated*
Posted By: Tipleloop
Subject: WIP Need help >.< *updated*
Date Posted: 18 July 2009 at 1:38am
postpone last WIP making new WIP... well... I made this when I got disconnected for a whole day, >.< need all help I can get for this one especially AA >.<
  ok I need C&C >.< just C&C i'll do the AA myself
  Update no one give me C&C
correct the tail and cloak, on progres but slow... I need C&C >.<
please.....
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Posted By: littlesapphire
Date Posted: 18 July 2009 at 6:11pm
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It's looking pretty good. As for getting advice, it's best to be patient. You'll eventually get someone to help you :) As I said, I really think it's looking good, honestly. I'm not sure if I like the colors you chose to shade the skin with. It makes it look really bright and saturated. For instance, the skin colors are literally orange, which isn't natural unless you use cheap sunless tanning cream :D Or you're an oompa loompa. I fiddled really quickly with the skin palette and came up with this:  Although I realized too late that you were using part of the skin colors in the hair as well >_> Although I'm sure that's something that can be worked around! Also, I feel like the skin should have way more highlighting. It's nicely shaded, but it still feels flat. And on both characters, their ears are very flat and without detail. Ears are very intricate and beautiful in their own right, and deserve a little attention. It's hard to get all the details when you're working with pixels, but even a little would make the piece as a whole more interesting. I feel like I could help out more if you sketched out what the rest of the piece will look like, the way the guys legs and cape will be positioned, any details on the mer's tail, etc. |
Posted By: Reuben
Date Posted: 18 July 2009 at 8:14pm
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C+C not needed good job. ------------- 
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Posted By: Tipleloop
Date Posted: 19 July 2009 at 1:11am
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@littlesapphire: thanks <333
about the skin colours... I still working on my colour palette >.< mixing colours I just can't make the right choice sometime... (np I will try to re mix the colours again ^^), about ears.. I forgot about them lol... just found it when u told me lol thanks, ok I will adjust the skin colours and lightning :) thanks ur help is always needed <3333333 @Reuben : thanks <33
*update*
 here is the update I made today... hmmm I will remake it with littlesapphire C&C latter, made change in the man tummy not much though....but I sketched out the tail :D ok I will tell a little story about this pixel...
it was my OC for my manga (comic book in Japanese) titled summoner, for u which one looked more like the summoner... maybe u will think the man was the summoner... but what if the girl is the summoner?
well the story was.. the stronger creature/power u summon the bigger sacrifice u have to make including being the creature itself, so the girl is the summoner and she summoned the power of water that make she turn into half fish... u can call her mermaid now... and the man there was the spirit of water so I will not do the foot >.< now and ever.... (maybe I will replace it with shadow) |