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I made a WIP thread.

Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 25 February 2026 at 6:41am


Topic: I made a WIP thread.
Posted By: jeremy
Subject: I made a WIP thread.
Date Posted: 04 August 2009 at 4:42pm
I decided it's better to have people correct my mistakes when I don't think I'm finished :)
 
*UPDATE*
 
 
Ref:
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You look like a characature already, don'cha :D
 
 
Basically looking for any critiques of improving likeness, colours and rendering. etc.



Replies:
Posted By: Hatch
Date Posted: 05 August 2009 at 3:17pm
I believe you need more contrast and less red in the skin tones. Also, I don't think the texturing on the forehead near the hairline looks good. I'm not sure why you put that there.

Aaaand, the wrinkles on his neck make him look considerably more aged than the reference.

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Posted By: jeremy
Date Posted: 07 August 2009 at 5:43pm

I disagree with the redness comment, everything else taken on board

http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/jonkydonkey.png">
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