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Topic: let the cat throw stones wip
Posted By: mambazo
Subject: let the cat throw stones wip
Date Posted: 21 September 2009 at 7:49am
Hi all,

Decided to attempt the weekly challenge for the first time!

Its a combination of "Let the cat out of the bag" and "People in glass houses shouldn't throw stones"

Comments & criticisms welcome!





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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 21 September 2009 at 8:07am
Heh yes, nice idea, and you got the image very nice so far as well!

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Posted By: mambazo
Date Posted: 21 September 2009 at 9:57am
@lollige: Thanks

I've having trouble with this cat, the style doesn't fit, and he has no 'character' :S

I'd like to make him mischievous instead of angry but the expression alludes me...




Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 21 September 2009 at 2:08pm
He definitely does have character! However, it is more of a wolf. all paws could be more catish, and he needs a chin

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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 21 September 2009 at 2:17pm
Originally posted by Lollige

He definitely does have character! However, it is more of a wolf. all paws could be more catish, and he needs a chin


Dude, just because Netherladaise cats are pussies don't mean other nations don't have mean wolfish cats


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Posted By: mambazo
Date Posted: 21 September 2009 at 4:05pm
Scrapped the old cat, looked too much like a gremlin.

Here's the new concept...

Any suggestions? :)




Posted By: JediDude
Date Posted: 21 September 2009 at 7:46pm
I think you should show some sort of indication that the cat threw the stone, like having his arm swooping down. Right now it just looks like a random cat. Nice art btw!


Posted By: AngelOTG
Date Posted: 21 September 2009 at 8:47pm
Maybe you can make his tail be what threw the rock? Would add to the effect and be easy to manage. :)


Posted By: Manupix
Date Posted: 22 September 2009 at 12:58am
Looks great! The animals are cool. But yes, I'm afraid it can't be understood that the cat threw the stone.

You have a persp issue on the wall: it can't be seen from above, only either horizontally or from below, from the dog's p o v.

The wall dithering is too even, try to find a more irregular pattern to make a nice texture. And the dog dithering too.


Posted By: mambazo
Date Posted: 22 September 2009 at 5:18am
Reworking the wall (unfinished!), and have modified most of the dithering.

Added some action lines for the cat's tail too...

Is this going in the right direction? :)




Posted By: dpixel
Date Posted: 22 September 2009 at 8:34am
I think I like the other cat better.  It's more mischievious looking, plus it looks more like it's throwing stones...lol

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hehe (ಠ_ಠ ) o_- :p


Posted By: mambazo
Date Posted: 22 September 2009 at 9:14am
I submitted the final, got as much fun out of it as I can I think :)



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