Coyote and wolf
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Topic: Coyote and wolf
Posted By: MattM
Subject: Coyote and wolf
Date Posted: 03 October 2009 at 1:57pm
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I am looking for some advice on how to improve the form and color of the animals.
Looking forward to feedback, thanks! 
These are the reference pictures. 
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Replies:
Posted By: Dhr. Bosch
Date Posted: 03 October 2009 at 3:18pm
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coyote's are slender and elongated. yours is a bit squidged. the wolfs head is too large or his body too small, and he could use a bit more neck. good luck! ------------- Vanitas, vanitatum omnia vanitas |
Posted By: MattM
Date Posted: 14 October 2009 at 12:21am
I made some changes based on the feedback given. Additional suggestions?
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Posted By: dpixel
Date Posted: 14 October 2009 at 8:10am
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For a small peice it's hard to get a lot of detail, but rear legs of the wolf could use more detail and shading. And maybe more of a point on the tip of the tail.
The hair is going to be hard. You might need another color or 2 for that.
Nice though. I like these. ------------- |
Posted By: Dhr. Bosch
Date Posted: 14 October 2009 at 9:21am
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much improved! i agree with the above post and i would like to add that the coyote could use a better defined neck ------------- Vanitas, vanitatum omnia vanitas |
Posted By: MattM
Date Posted: 02 November 2009 at 2:44am
Thanks for the advice! I implemented the suggestions given. Additionally, I adjusted the wolf's back legs, lowered the coyote's head and shortened the coyote's muzzle. To make the animals more hairy, I added a lighter color to the outline. Does it help? Thanks! |
Posted By: r1k
Date Posted: 02 November 2009 at 3:39am
you could try taking out the darkest brown in the wolf as its not very noticable (atleast not at 1x) and then use the extra color for a lighter brown which you could use for AA on the outline around the light fur and perhaps for shading to, which would like sort of like this: just if you want the outline a little more solid. |