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[WIP] baby.doll

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Topic: [WIP] baby.doll
Posted By: nimrod7
Subject: [WIP] baby.doll
Date Posted: 12 March 2010 at 5:59pm
hi, my first WIP :


- don't know what to do now, but want to improve, especially because there is 16 colors out there barely visible.

thanks in advance for c&c & suggestions.



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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 13 March 2010 at 8:53pm
Very nice. My only crit is the colors. That shade of yellow(too green) is not quite right for that shade of pink. I would also try to include a dash of purple in the pinks, like the black selout pixels.


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Posted By: Manupix
Date Posted: 14 March 2010 at 3:40am
Very promising wip!

"there is 16 colors out there barely visible":
probably a good hint there are too many. Try 8!

I think some major color option remains undecided. For instance: is it mostly neutral greys with 2 other colors, or mostly colors with some transition greys? (in the latter case, greys might be reconsidered)



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