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I'll echo Imagician's sentiments; the picture is great, but we're meant to focus on 3 subjects here, aside from the background, the third(the hero in the middle) is hidden among the yellow/green hues of the monster/villain. Maybe assigning the hero with the sword in the middle his own personal color highlights here and there(nothing that stands out too much), with just enough to show some separation between the two(hard to say if red or blue would be better, as it's saturated with cool colors and the blue sea around the fray, and the girl already has the pink/red assignment).
Also, the foreshortening on the right hand of the monster seems a bit wonky to me. I think resizing it just a bit smaller would fit the depth the character is meant to be in.
Aside from that, fun piece!
Noice view The monster, too
Took me a while though to realize that there's a second person in the picture.
Remember seeing the WIP on twitter, awesome work as always.
@The B.O.B.: Yeah there are some readability issues with the warrior, not exactly sure how to fix it, I think it's more than just the color scheme tbh. Definitely some lessons to consider next time, thanks for the crits.