Scary edit
Yes the eyes seem larger than they should be due to those lines that were mean't to show certain facial expressions, didn't work though, as you saw.
To my defence I though it had less contrast. I'm working on a very old laptop and choosing colours on this thing is a bitch. Surprisingly your edits colours are more for what I thought I had. Acually they are...lol, like I said monitor is messed up. But no excuses, I'll fix this up ;)
Colours likes Adarias, I'll take that as a complement. Thanks for the help,.
Aside from being not very anatomically correct (Eyesize, basically) the way you've shaded is just making the face look really wrinkly- instead of lines, do blocks of different colour. There doesn't really seem to be a defined lightsource either.
It looks oekaki-ish because of all that too.
Experimentation is fun :)
EDIT: Like this:
The colours remind me of Adarias'- Cool! :þ
scary, but very nice :D