the eyes look like metal, try looking references from eyes on the net. They use gradients this way is looking like copper. Hair needs improvement, dont be afraid to use colors if you need.
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Eyes look strange. Maybe you're smoked?
May you have to rework the hair to balance with the over detailed eyes? (It's just my opinion.)