	thefevafortheflava @ 1/18/2007 17:52 commented on Starbucks I must say that this piece was not something I took very seriously. I was my first attempt at pixel art... I am not an artist by any means. I did it to pass the time in between classes... My technique improved as i went on and by the end I was quite proud of it. I see what everyone is saying about it and most peoples points are quite valid... That said, Please if you want to comment.. "Constructive criticism" is appreciated, not flaming. Saying things like "read the rules first" is just ignorance. I did not make the block for this site i made it for another site, and I didn't even know about this site when I started it. I submitted to this site hoping to get some positive feedback on how I can improve future endeavors. I followed the "rules" to the best of my abilities. Obviously someone is not going to ace every aspect of pixel art on their first piece, and the mentality that my first piece should be keen to every nuance and aspect of "pixel art" is quite childish. I am not going to revise the starbucks any time soon, I have moved onto a new pixeldam block. THANK YOU SO MUCH to everyone who realized that this is my FIRST attempt at pixel art... And there were a lot of things i didn't know how to do and a lot of nuances that i did not know about. Constructive criticism from Jalonso and Daporta etc. was very appreciated. But to those who flamed me, flaming someone on their first piece is not a great way to encourage to people to join this genre of art.
	thefevafortheflava @ 3/22/2006 21:24 commented on My face great work! however, keeping in mind pixel art is usually kept to a low color count... this piece is too monochrmatic it needs contrast and more of a range of brightnesses... even faces in the dark have really bright points and ultra dark points.
	thefevafortheflava @ 3/10/2006 15:24 commented on Room view 2 I'm a newbie, but the massive attack poster is very distracting... As its not the focal point of the piece you might consider making it ligher in color... and make it less detailed... it would be a stronger overall piece then.
	thefevafortheflava @ 3/8/2006 22:35 commented on Starbucks OK, I updated teh file to have some of the revisions. The drive through has been revised, the drive through window and auning have been revised. Both cars have been revised etc... Still more revisions to come.... .... PS... YOU ALL NEED TO TAKE IT EASY ON NEWBIES!
	thefevafortheflava @ 3/8/2006 22:23 commented on Starbucks I NEVER SAID I DIDNT USE PHOTOSHOP!!!! holy s**t people,..... I used photoshop but i have since removed the redone everythign done with photoshop i just havent submitted it yet and only about 20% was done with photoshop!
	thefevafortheflava @ 3/6/2006 09:34 commented on Starbucks oh and TWAT???? WTF basically your saying SINCE I DONT KNOW WHAT IM DOING AND THIS IS MY FIRST PIECE I AM A TWAT AND I SHOULD LEAVE THE SITE.... IVE NEVER DONE PIXEL ART BEFORE SO BACK THE FUCK UP!
	thefevafortheflava @ 3/6/2006 09:31 commented on Starbucks FK YOU A*E SINCE OTHER PEOPLE EXPLAINED WHAT I SHOULD HAVE DONE I FIXED IT... YOUR JUST AN A*E THAT WANTED TO FLAME ME ITS MY FIRST DAMN PIECE AND I HAVE SINCE FIXED THE GRADIENTS, i didnt know you werent supposed to use gradients etc... FK OFF
	thefevafortheflava @ 3/5/2006 19:30 commented on Space imprisonment - iso.cell#1 Yeah... so by far the coolest ISO room ive seen on here so far.
	thefevafortheflava @ 3/5/2006 19:26 commented on Happy Toaster SO ADDICTING.... I DONT KNOW WHY!
	thefevafortheflava @ 3/5/2006 19:16 commented on Smoking soldier love the style.
	thefevafortheflava @ 3/5/2006 19:09 commented on Tekken 5: 2d collectors edition IM NOT A GAMER ANYMORE BUT THAT KICKS ASS!!!
	thefevafortheflava @ 3/5/2006 15:48 commented on Starbucks WHO ARE YOU THE PIXEL POLICE?? IT WONT BE REMOVED BECAUSE I DID NOTHING WRONG. ESPECIALLY CONSIDERING THAT A- ITS NOT FINISHED and B- ITS MY FIRST PIECE YOU CAN SHOVE YOUR COMMENTS UP YOUR A CAUSE IT WAS JUST POINTLESS FLAMING... AS FOR YOUR WORK I COULDN"T GIVE ST ABOUT IT, MY POINT IS THAT YOU NEED TO MIND YOUR OWN BUSINESS. DAMN KID
	thefevafortheflava @ 3/5/2006 09:34 commented on some iso tiles Very nice work on the roof of the shack very smooth.
	thefevafortheflava @ 3/5/2006 09:24 commented on Super Deformed Delta I hate dragonball anything(i.e. the hair) but its a great piece!
	thefevafortheflava @ 3/5/2006 01:29 commented on tribal peppermint pig/miascugh collaboration absolutely amazing it really pops off of the screen!
	thefevafortheflava @ 3/5/2006 00:13 commented on personal avatar Hey I like your stuff.... ever considered doing a pixeldam?
	thefevafortheflava @ 3/4/2006 12:43 commented on Starbucks Faktablad - thanks for the good feedback, as i said work in progress so good feedback is always welcome, and yea i was planning on changing some of those black lines. the reason some of my lines arent completely isometric is more of an artistic deal... The world isn't perfect so i flaw my art... yeah the sign has some blurring it was skewed but that is skewed pixel art i created. I will work on all that stuff... Like i said my first attempt at pixel art so i dont really know about some of its nuances. ( like i didnt knwo that people gavea shit if you used gradients???) As for the photoshop stuff, there are some patterns like on the road but they were patterns i created myself ( There again didn't know anyone gave 2 shits about using a pattern). But i can see where everyone is coming from and I appreciate comments that arent pointless flames.
	thefevafortheflava @ 3/4/2006 10:00 commented on Starbucks Oh and thanks for the feedback d-p, feedback that isnt pointless flaming
	thefevafortheflava @ 3/4/2006 09:55 commented on Starbucks It's funny when you can tell someone like shark is jealous... Everything on here i created myself there is use of gradients but thats merely a time saver. as for "noise" on the roof i never used noise. Skewed logos??? NO i ceated those signs and logos PIXEL BY PIXEL! pretty funny from a guy whose stuff is s****y and he has like 15 pieces.. Get a life and stop flaming people