This looks pretty cool! I suggest you go through and AA everything, especially, the monorail track (is that what it is?) and the moons. I'd also rethink your color choices for the grass and tree. They seem a bit saturated, especially given the lighting. The blue light from the moon would tint it a bit towards blue, also. I'd also make the lighting on the tree and other foreground objects a bit more dramatic. The light source in your piece is completely behind the tree, so it would be a lot darker on the side we can see.

I agree with hsn2555`s stars. good job

Edited by chess - 14 October 2008 at 12:17pm

I think he means there should be some blades of grass drawn closer to the front. Rather than some grass in the distance then just green.

Ow, the old building was alot better then that new metal silo or what it is :/ feels rather out of place, did like it more without anything on the right.

The shading on the tree top feels a bit funny, you might want to look at the shadow it casts and then look at the tree itself again.

The grass colour is alot better then in the very first wip. Think you can really work more on the sky however, right now it feels rather... Stiff? mecanical? a more realistic sky has more natural flow in it, and think that would work alot better as contrast to the very hightech monorail and buildings in the backgrund.

Also, as mentiond before, some stuff needs more AA. like the moons, they feel very much to sharp right now, do not feel disstant as for now.

Would like to say, that the light from the moon can be very strong if its full, and thus making stuff quite bright with its full colour (with a slright blueness i guess, with a blue moon).

And with this piece, you got 3! full moons, so the light should be rather strong form that (well, if thats how these moons work, they maynot be be same as our moon)

However, the change Skamocore did does work alot better. Atlest now the sky gives the hole thing a loot stronger "at night" feeling. Otherwise I suport stronger colours that you have.

everything is more saturated but the red of the guys suit just doesn't look right

AA'd the moons,added stars(i think they look really nice),changed the suit guy to a shade dark shade of blue,bigger shadows and some small tweaks,Better?

I see what you mean,so ive had another go at aaing the moons

Edited by fawful - 15 October 2008 at 10:26am

Last version,any final nit picks?