WIP (Work In Progress) | |
![]() |
![]() |
![]() ![]() |
Author | Message |
minipuck
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 August 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 185 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Posted: 19 October 2008 at 1:53am |
i need help with his pants.
![]() i know anatomy isn't right, and the angle of his body and his head isn't right either, but im still not that good at all. Edited by minipuck - 19 October 2008 at 1:57am |
|
![]() |
|
Hapiel
Rear Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266 |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
A quick and sloppy edit containing some suggestions.
If you did everything you did by now with a purpose, it should not be too hard to find those differences.. If you did not think of every pixel you placed if it was nececerily, it might become harder. ![]() |
|
![]() |
|
minipuck
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 August 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 185 |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
i see stuff you changed. Eyebrows, nipples, belly button, mouth, nose.
you used 1 lighter color when i used 2. What you did with the legs really looks as i imagined how i wanted it to be. Thanks for the helpfull edit. and i normally don't consider each pixel i place, i guess i will have to start doing that. edit: Not as clean as yours, but then you're way better. ![]() BTW light is supposed to come straight from above. Edited by minipuck - 19 October 2008 at 5:36am |
|
![]() |
|
Fatalis67
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 08 August 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 80 |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
Round out the left side of the head, its a straight line and looks unnatural.
|
|
![]() |
|
Hapiel
Rear Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266 |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
If the light would come from the top, how would there ever fall light on his legs?
Take a look at my version again, they look better the tin way too I think.. Also, I would flip his left shoe in your version. |
|
![]() |
|
minipuck
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 August 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 185 |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
thanks for the help lollige
http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/36767.htm |
|
![]() |
|
pixelblink
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865 |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
well i dunno, dude. The head bothers me more than anything so I'll start there:
where's his neck?? his forehead seems to run into his hat and then square off to the right. Very unnatural and awkward. Trying drawing a head form over the hat and see how it'd look. You've got the potential for a great piece but I think you need to use a bit more real life reference when dealing with the human form... even in a fantasy image such as this :) |
|
![]() |
|
Ravey
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 04 November 2008 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 11 |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
15 colours is way too many! The two main colours you're using should already be quite similar and you should pick colours that can be reused. I managed to cut it down to 6 colours and did some really rough editing to make the lighting look better and to round things out a little... Made the head fit the body a little more too.
Here's a quick edit: ![]() Edited by Ravey - 11 November 2008 at 1:47am |
|
![]() |
|
minipuck
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 August 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 185 |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
waddja mean 15 colors? it's 11 +transparency.
i started this piece as just a head, im going to restart it, to make everything better. lineart so far ![]() ![]() ![]() i know his ear is way too big xD Edited by minipuck - 11 November 2008 at 10:39am |
|
![]() |
|
jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
You are doing a good thing revisiting and improving on this pixelart.
I think Ravey's edit shows how the pixelling can really improve your art here. Zoom and learn from that. I think that its the somewhat chaotic pixel work that has been most questionable. Be patient. |
|
|
|
![]() |
|
Ravey
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 04 November 2008 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 11 |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
Looks to me like 14 colours + transparency.
![]() Regardless though, good luck with the new version. |
|
![]() |
|
![]() ![]() |
||
Forum Jump |
You cannot post new topics in this forum You cannot reply to topics in this forum You cannot delete your posts in this forum You cannot edit your posts in this forum You cannot create polls in this forum You cannot vote in polls in this forum |