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glitchey
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 18 July 2005 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 46 |
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hiya! im currently working on a vietnam esque chopper right now give me some good C&C |
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"you sunk my jangerjam!" homsar
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Shark
Commander ![]() ![]() a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136 |
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i think it needs some more roundness, its all kinda boxy!
camo pattern is pretty gd but the legs need more shading |
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PixelSnader
Commander ![]() ![]() Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194 |
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2 often used qoutes: -use reference |
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glitchey
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 18 July 2005 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 46 |
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![]() here we go, an updated version |
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"you sunk my jangerjam!" homsar
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Blueberry_pie
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That's a big improvement... but it still looks a bit too 'blocky' to me.
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Wannahlakujuu
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205 |
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Also, the wind shield is too jagged, and the line should more consistant, or something like that |
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Maestro
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 27 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 31 |
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Yea well, what you can see from the reference that snader posted, is
that the rotor and the cockpit and the smaller rotor are out of
proportion. Look at the Huey! The smaller rotor is two thirds as big as
the cockpit!
And as the guy above me pointed out, the windshield, well. It doesn't look like glass yet. The colours are allright, and I'm having problems with colouring myself, but the drawing itself needs more work. Keep it up though! Edited by Maestro |
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glitchey
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 18 July 2005 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 46 |
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uhhh its not ment to be identical to a huey but ill fix your promblems
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Pixel_Outlaw
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Here is my two cents, Although the chopper blades are very thin 3 pixels they feel like lego chopper blades. I don't quite understand the ring around the tail section blades. It kinda looks like you're trying to make a chopper with a fighter jet fusealoge.I have a feeling that the tail should be a bit fatter ar the base, it would give it some bulky military muscle! Also move the blade base up from the center. Excellent work overall. Good effort! |
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glitchey
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 18 July 2005 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 46 |
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ok ive got a final version with everything you siad fixed, any last minute complaints? |
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Pixel_Outlaw
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is there supposed to be an updated picture? If so we can't see it....
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glitchey
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 18 July 2005 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 46 |
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sorry guys my comp has been dead recently im making this post from school, ill have an updated version the moment i get home |
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glitchey
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 18 July 2005 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 46 |
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right after battling my internet i can finnaly give you the (hope fully) final version http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/5913/zedamaphone6xc.png sorry about the lack of easy pics but my connection hates me |
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Joo Joo
Seaman ![]() Joined: 12 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3 |
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Best one eva man!
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