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Quote glitchey Replybullet Topic: chopper
    Posted: 20 August 2005 at 8:06pm

hiya! im currently working on a vietnam esque chopper right now give me some good C&C

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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 21 August 2005 at 4:17am
i think it needs some more roundness, its all kinda boxy!
camo pattern is pretty gd but the legs need more shading
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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 21 August 2005 at 2:39pm

2 often used qoutes:

-use reference
-google is your friend

http://www.fas.org/man/dod-101/sys/ac/uh-1.htm


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Quote glitchey Replybullet Posted: 22 August 2005 at 12:48am

here we go, an updated version
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Quote Blueberry_pie Replybullet Posted: 22 August 2005 at 3:20am
That's a big improvement... but it still looks a bit too 'blocky' to me.
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Quote Wannahlakujuu Replybullet Posted: 22 August 2005 at 7:09am

Also, the wind shield is too jagged, and the line should more consistant, or something like that

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Quote Maestro Replybullet Posted: 22 August 2005 at 7:43am
Yea well, what you can see from the reference that snader posted, is that the rotor and the cockpit and the smaller rotor are out of proportion. Look at the Huey! The smaller rotor is two thirds as big as the cockpit!
And as the guy above me pointed out, the windshield, well. It doesn't look like glass yet.

The colours are allright, and I'm having problems with colouring myself, but the drawing itself needs more work.
Keep it up though!


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Quote glitchey Replybullet Posted: 22 August 2005 at 3:40pm
uhhh its not ment to be identical to a huey but ill fix your promblems
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Quote Pixel_Outlaw Replybullet Posted: 01 September 2005 at 9:31am

Here is my two cents,

Although the chopper blades are very thin 3 pixels they feel like lego chopper blades. I don't quite understand the ring around the tail section blades. It kinda looks like you're trying to make a chopper with a fighter jet fusealoge.I have a feeling that the tail should be a bit fatter ar the base, it would give it some bulky military muscle! Also move the blade base up from the center. Excellent work overall. Good effort!

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Quote glitchey Replybullet Posted: 06 September 2005 at 3:49pm

ok ive got a final version with everything you siad fixed, any last minute complaints?

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Quote Pixel_Outlaw Replybullet Posted: 06 September 2005 at 4:02pm
is there supposed to be an updated picture? If so we can't see it....
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Quote glitchey Replybullet Posted: 12 September 2005 at 9:53pm

sorry guys my comp has been dead recently im making this post from school, ill have an updated version the moment i get home

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Quote glitchey Replybullet Posted: 13 September 2005 at 1:55am

right after battling my internet i can finnaly give you the (hope fully) final version http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/5913/zedamaphone6xc.png

sorry about the lack of easy pics but my connection hates me

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Quote Joo Joo Replybullet Posted: 19 September 2005 at 9:46pm
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