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figured i should probably start getting crits on these bc tsr isn't really helping too much

first one has 17 colors iirc, and the second one has 12. i've been using different palettes for each one too so yeah

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1up Seaman Joined: 16 November 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Topic: this is an title Posted: 27 November 2008 at 9:58am
	figured i should probably start getting crits on these bc tsr isn't really helping too much first one has 17 colors iirc, and the second one has 12. i've been using different palettes for each one too so yeah
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Damian Commander Joined: 24 February 2023 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 455	Posted: 27 November 2008 at 1:42pm
	I like the new style....my twin doesn't though XD Different colour Palettes. Why? The second one seems to have matching colours with the Blues there, are could easily use a few colours from the first cutting down on colours. Thats your decision though. My fave out of all of these is the second last one, I just love the pose and feeling from that piece. May I ask what this is for? or is it just to see how your style has changed over 1 years time period?
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1up Seaman Joined: 16 November 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 27 November 2008 at 2:38pm
	yeah, it's just to see how much I changed really. and the different palettes is more just me trying to get better working at making new palettes from scratch, since i tend to reuse them from old pieces over and over started on the 3rd one too
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Hapiel Rear Admiral Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266	Posted: 27 November 2008 at 2:41pm
	I can not wait for the 2009 versions!
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Saboteur Commander Joined: 29 January 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 888	Posted: 27 November 2008 at 3:13pm
	The 2009 versions kick the absolute sh*t out of the 2008 ones. Whatever drugs you're on, I want some... though I get the feeling I should be asking Souly. There's a definite Souly feel to the characters. Ys, very good. Not an overly large fan of the overly large hat, but all else is pure success.
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 27 November 2008 at 7:49pm
	*Originally posted by Lollige* I can not wait for the 2009 versions! The quote of the year!!! I love the hat on the first one being bigger but it seems out of scale 'at the head' not the height, that's cool.
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1up Seaman Joined: 16 November 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 27 November 2008 at 8:41pm
	IT SURE IS FAT MAN'S CROTCHULAR AREA IN HERE not really sure what you mean about the hat though :T
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 27 November 2008 at 9:00pm

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1up Seaman Joined: 16 November 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 27 November 2008 at 9:18pm
	ah, i'll fix that then also im getting the feeling i made the fat guys legs too detailed Edited by 1up - 27 November 2008 at 9:20pm
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 27 November 2008 at 9:33pm
	I say not, because the focus of attention on the fat guy is the belly (were the eyes goes naturally first). Unless you make the shirt show the bellybutton, or add some interest there, then the detailed pants balances things off and will make the hand not stand out too much... ...imho :)
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ellie-is Commander Joined: 12 September 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 706	Posted: 28 November 2008 at 4:49am
	Awesome. As people have said, 2009 version shall kick some ass :P Also, I liked it better when you could see the fat guy's belly.
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1up Seaman Joined: 16 November 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 28 November 2008 at 2:08pm
	decided to just redo the shirt and hair so yeah edit: puttin off the hat Edited by 1up - 28 November 2008 at 2:19pm
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Reo Rear Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 679	Posted: 28 November 2008 at 2:16pm
	I love that fatty To to keen on the hat tho...
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1up Seaman Joined: 16 November 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 28 November 2008 at 4:10pm
	alright so i hopefully finished the fat guy, but i've been staring at it for too long to see if there's any problems i'll fix the hat and start on the next guy some time tomorrow
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Sig~ Seaman Joined: 12 August 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 17	Posted: 28 November 2008 at 4:37pm
	The fat guy is awesome! I want to see the others characters Edited by Sig~ - 28 November 2008 at 4:37pm
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1up Seaman Joined: 16 November 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 29 November 2008 at 4:08pm
	oh i thought i posted the new one already guess not
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 30 November 2008 at 2:48am
	Great work on the leather jacket detail, I really like it. :) You should think about doing animations with some of them. :)
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Damian Commander Joined: 24 February 2023 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 455	Posted: 30 November 2008 at 5:51am
	Fourth Guy owns! I just love the style!
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1up Seaman Joined: 16 November 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 30 November 2008 at 1:42pm
	*Originally posted by Aleiav* Great work on the leather jacket detail, I really like it. :) You should think about doing animations with some of them. :) haha, i would if i could animate something this big IT SURE IS MULTIPLE LIGHTSOURCES IN HERE
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x-death Commander Joined: 09 February 2019 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 151	Posted: 30 November 2008 at 10:05pm
	2007 versions: well you've probably realized all of this already but the contrast on there eyes is to high. and the darker colors around the outside wrecks the sprites. 2008 versions: well i would say that your line art could be refined rather quickly. as you can still see overlapping pixels on your black outline. and from there i would say having blended outlines on them would really help. the fat guy is good, the last one hasn't been finished yet, the second guys gun looks as if it was never finished. the first guys just needs work with its outlines and all of that. and the third one i would say needs to have a bit more shading overall and needs to have finished fire on his hands, or what ever it is suppose to be.
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