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Filax_666
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    Posted: 05 October 2005 at 2:21am
The first time i saw this lineart i knew i was made especially for me
just jokin.

Heres the original lineart by ensellitis:


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Quote Fugitive Replybullet Posted: 05 October 2005 at 2:59am
It's not showing up for me....
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Quote Filax_666 Replybullet Posted: 05 October 2005 at 7:25am
hum...what do you mean with that?you cant see the images or you
dont think its good?

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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 05 October 2005 at 7:50am
I can't see them either.  Of course DA hasn't been working for me at all today.  Upload them to http://imagehost.ensellitis.com. I really want to see what you have done with that lineart. 
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Quote Blueberry_pie Replybullet Posted: 05 October 2005 at 8:16am
Yeah, DeviantART doesn't allow image hotlinking. Right clicking on them and selecting 'View image' in FireFox works though.
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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 05 October 2005 at 8:20am
Not if your computer is being a retard and not letting you see anything from DA  
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Quote Filax_666 Replybullet Posted: 05 October 2005 at 8:28am
it only hapenned now! i could see them before...
s***, i feel so stupid...

sorry guys...gimme just a lil bit to upload them from somewhere
else...

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Quote Filax_666 Replybullet Posted: 05 October 2005 at 8:43am
hum...you can try seeing it at DA ( http://filax666.deviantart.com )
while i upload in Ensellitis imagehosting...

sorry again
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Quote Filax_666 Replybullet Posted: 05 October 2005 at 8:49am
done...i hope you see it now.



This is all ive done so far, but i think im going the right way...im not
sure about the hair and the aaing on the brown line though...

Ensellitis: mind if keep using it to upload the other updates?or there
is a image replacement/image edit option?

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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 05 October 2005 at 8:56am
there is no edit/replace option.  I may add that later.  but feel free to upload whatever you want, that's what i made it for.  
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Quote Filax_666 Replybullet Posted: 05 October 2005 at 9:00am
thanks

and what about the pic? is it good enough to match the beauty of the
base lineart?
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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 05 October 2005 at 12:51pm
the hair is pretty good, but I think the body could do with some shading, darken the boob and the thigh of her 'kicking' leg... so far you only have a bit of highlights  and it looks a bit plain
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Quote Filax_666 Replybullet Posted: 05 October 2005 at 2:22pm
i was already planing to da that, after finishing the highlights.
my bigest problem now is the hair...i think it looks too simple

I would have advanced more today but i went to the cinema. "Charlie
and the chocolate factory" is amazing!
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Quote Fugitive Replybullet Posted: 05 October 2005 at 3:45pm
It's looking good
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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 05 October 2005 at 5:49pm
It looks great so far.  Just take some of leel's advice and it will look 100% better.  
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Quote Filax_666 Replybullet Posted: 07 October 2005 at 1:43pm
didnt do much today...school keeps me busy



Started the shading on the body and added a new shade on the face
(and some other parts of the body).I also modified the hair a bit and
added a new shade to it.
Next thing i'll be doing is to finish the base shadows, add a second
shadow (as I did with the arm) and also anti aliase whats needed...

maybe the line of shadow i added on the back is too heavy ...but
that why i posted this here! if you think this is the best thing you
ever saw (im sure it isnt) or if you think it sucks (lets hope it doesnt
) be sure to leave your opinion and (please...) say everything
that you think that will help to improve the piece, cause its relly
needing...
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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 07 October 2005 at 8:07pm

i think you are trying to AA wronlgy on the outlines, because the pixels on the corners are lightened, where in usual aa (usually for transparency reasons) the cornerpixles are the darkest...


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Quote Filax_666 Replybullet Posted: 08 October 2005 at 12:06am
ok. i'll work on it.
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Quote Filax_666 Replybullet Posted: 09 October 2005 at 2:32am


No major changes...I just added the second shadow and anti aliased
all I thought that wasnt smoth enough...
Any suggestions on what to do next
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Quote acrylicana Replybullet Posted: 09 October 2005 at 8:36am
Good job so far. :D

Suggestions? Maybe some more on her hair (her left side), and some slight medium shadow  where the hair meets the back?
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Quote Filax_666 Replybullet Posted: 09 October 2005 at 1:19pm
thanks acrylicana you're right, i should really work on that
hair...it looks kinda s***ty...

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Quote Filax_666 Replybullet Posted: 10 October 2005 at 12:55pm


I tried to soften the shading on the left part of the hair and I think its
OK...but when I worked on the right side i totaly f***** it up...

I think that after I finish the hair I'll consider it finished!
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Quote Pixel_Outlaw Replybullet Posted: 11 October 2005 at 7:42am
Hmmm maybe a brunette? That way you coauld give the hair more color depth.
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Quote Filax_666 Replybullet Posted: 11 October 2005 at 8:50am
Im gonna feel so stupid now...what the hell is a brunette?

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Quote Amythist Replybullet Posted: 11 October 2005 at 10:33am
brown hair ^.~
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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 11 October 2005 at 11:41am
Originally posted by Pixel_Outlaw

Hmmm maybe a brunette? That way you coauld give the hair more color depth.


Destory a blonde???  Now you and I must fight to the death in the Thunder Pixel Dome!!! 
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Quote Filax_666 Replybullet Posted: 11 October 2005 at 1:23pm
Originally posted by Ensellitis

Destory a blonde??? Now you and I must fight to
the death in the Thunder Pixel Dome!!!




Maybe I'll do both...that way I wouldnt destroy the blond and I would
satisfy Oixel Outlaw's wish
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Quote Amythist Replybullet Posted: 11 October 2005 at 1:29pm
perhaps you could put yourself upto a challenge of blonde streaks in brown hair. o.0'
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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 11 October 2005 at 1:36pm
blondes have more fun :D
*admires blonde hair in mirror*
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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 11 October 2005 at 3:37pm
meh.. greens rule

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Quote Pixel_Outlaw Replybullet Posted: 11 October 2005 at 6:22pm
Brunetts all the way. Only like my past four girlfriends. Blonds can be pretty to though.
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Quote Filax_666 Replybullet Posted: 12 October 2005 at 10:15am
Originally posted by Amythist

perhaps you could put yourself upto a challenge of
blonde streaks in brown hair. o.0'

Love the idea, I feel really tempted to try it, although i'm not sure i'm
up to the challenge...

Originally posted by Pixel_Outlaw

Brunetts all the way. Only like my past four
girlfriends. Blonds can be pretty to though.

What a coincidence...its the same with me!

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