I've recently begun practicing spriting trees, a subject that I have always struggled with, even outside of pixel work. But just for once, I actually made a tree I'm somewhat happy with. Not to say it couldn't be better. Not at all! If anyone has Critique for me, be it for the even the grass/clouds, please don't hesitate to go all out.

nothing wrong with the light coming from above.

right now you have the large, leafy forms down. but they're still obvious shapes. Break it up a bit with more leafy texture, less uniform shapes. and I'd use that highlight more.

quick edit on the left side to show what I mean:


Overall looks great though.

also, try not to start more than 1 WIP thread at a time (helps avoid clutter and ensures you'll focus on a particular piece)- or, alternately, put several pieces in a single thread.


Edited by ThereIsNoCure - 20 August 2009 at 1:12pm