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Cryssy
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 03 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94 |
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Edit again: I hated the original skin color XD
YAY for harlots Edited by Cryssy |
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EyeCraft
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 07 July 2005 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 425 |
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Wow cool. This will look great when finished. Nice line art is always a
pleasure. Her left eyebrow seems somewhat out of place though, I think
its to do with the eyes. I mean the lower eyebrow would make the eye
slightly shorter, because the skin isnt stretched unlike the raised
one, try it in the mirror..
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randomblink
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Very interesting...
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Cryssy
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 03 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94 |
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Thanks eyecraft. You always give great CC :)
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EyeCraft
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 07 July 2005 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 425 |
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You're welcome
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Saboteur
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Hey, I think we all think that. You don't, not from what I see, at least. Pleeeeeease don't keep the mirrored hand. This is looking like its gonna turn out to be a nice peice, and personally I think the mirrored hand would take from it a little. Actually, it might not look too bad, cause you're probably going to work with a set lightsource... but I still think it's a good idea to not have it mirrored. And hey, if you wanted to be nitpicky, you could point out that the smirk would probably raise the bottom left edge of the (our) right eye a pixel or two |
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SpectreNectar
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Shouldn't she be looking at the sphere?
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inkspot
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 05 May 2005 Location: Estonia Online Status: Offline Posts: 452 |
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head shape, circle, square and hands are mirrored :D
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Cryssy
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 03 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94 |
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Originally posted by inkspot head shape, circle, square and hands are mirrored :D Umm if you can't give suggestions please don't post or even state the obvious.. :D Btw the circle isn't mirrored, there is a circle tool ;) Spectre: I haven't drawn the pupils yet :) Edited by Cryssy |
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Citizen_Insane
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 30 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 189 |
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Originally posted by inkspot
head shape, circle, square and hands are mirrored :D I'm not sure if this is even a comment..
I've been holding out on crits because it's still really basic... I keep checking back to see if you have more of it done... how's it coming along? I agree that you should probably try drawing two different hands, just to switch it up a bit.. but it might not even matter. |
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Cryssy
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 03 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94 |
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I am working on a step two to this. But I want a little more done for her first.
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Citizen_Insane
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 30 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 189 |
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ah.. no rush, then. take your time.
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EyeCraft
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 07 July 2005 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 425 |
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Nice update! Glad to see you're still moving along with it
![]() ![]() Skin shading seems very smooth at this point, I'd just advise be mindful of the bones. Keep it up! ![]() |
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Filax_666
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 10 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 108 |
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Maybe you could put some reflexes on the right part of the iris and of
the white part of the eye (thats where the light comes from right?) and erase that white line at the bottom of the black part. Otherwise is fantastic. Keep up. Edited by Filax_666 |
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Filax_666
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 10 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 108 |
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i was realy looking forward to see some improvement here
![]() know these things take their time but i still think you've probably done somethin n all this time... im just sayin this cause its a project i was realy loving to see and its been stopped for about 2 weeks... |
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Ensellitis
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 19 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10099 |
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She is like me, she got caught up in other projects... Lots to do.
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
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Filax_666
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 10 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 108 |
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Yeah, i understand she probably has lotsa things to do...i was just
sayin im hoping she shows us us some improvement soon, cause i was loving this... |
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Cryssy
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 03 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94 |
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hehehehe hope no more Filax ;)
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Wannahlakujuu
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205 |
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Nice update. The smile is a little awkward and looks a little unnatural. I have trouble with that too
edit: on second thought, maybe you don't even need the lips, or maybe just making them thinner. In stuff this style you can't really see defined lips. I think maybe them not being so red and being thinner would improve it a lot. Edited by Wannahlakujuu |
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I am Spartacus
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Shark
Commander ![]() ![]() a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136 |
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yeah, i think thin lips would add a better effect of scaryness as
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Cryssy
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 03 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94 |
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Can someone explain what you mean about the lips? I am willing to try things but I just am not understanding....this isn't really supposed to be scary
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Shark
Commander ![]() ![]() a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136 |
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i think they should be a bit thinner, they are very well shaded, but
you cold try a few different shapes |
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Cryssy
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 03 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94 |
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ok cartoonish or realish?
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Shark
Commander ![]() ![]() a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136 |
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realsih, but try and stay with that cool style you've already got goin
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Cryssy
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 03 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94 |
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well I am trying to merge cartoony, realistic, and animeish into one style because I draw that way pixels are a little different from paper
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Shark
Commander ![]() ![]() a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136 |
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well im digging it
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Cryssy
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 03 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94 |
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I am working on it expect an update sometime tonight
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Wannahlakujuu
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205 |
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Yes shark said it a little better than I did edit: and while it is not really supposed to be scary, the thin lips would add to the mysterious sortof eerie feel to the pic. Edited by Wannahlakujuu |
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