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    Posted: 17 March 2010 at 4:55pm
Hey, I could use some feedback on logo I'm working on. =)  I've never really done anything with AA before, so any help would be greatly appreciated.


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Quote Robinhood Replybullet Posted: 17 March 2010 at 5:27pm
AA could use some work...
          -You forgot to AA the eyes
          -And the nose too
          -This AA tutorial might help...
          -Try not to leave too many flat lines. They tend to look too edgy.

EDIT:

I hope I was helpful :)


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Quote Masna Replybullet Posted: 17 March 2010 at 5:49pm
Thank you so much!  That's an awesome edit.
I think I understand some of the concept a little bit more now.
I'll post a second attempt when it's done.

EDIT: Here's another try.



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Quote Masna Replybullet Posted: 17 March 2010 at 7:33pm
I figured this was worthy of a new post.  It's the final (?) rendition of the piece.



I would really appreciate any crits.
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Quote Robinhood Replybullet Posted: 18 March 2010 at 10:15am
Bottom parts are good...  But the circle has a lot of flat diagonal edges.
Shouldn't look too flat, it's a circle! :D

EDIT (the animation might be a little hard to see)

Same goes for parts of the flame.  Also the eye isn't looking very circular.

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