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Masna
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Hey, I could use some feedback on logo I'm working on. =) I've never really done anything with AA before, so any help would be greatly appreciated.
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Robinhood
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AA could use some work...
-You forgot to AA the eyes -And the nose too -This AA tutorial might help... -Try not to leave too many flat lines. They tend to look too edgy. EDIT: ![]() I hope I was helpful :) Edited by TheRobinHood - 17 March 2010 at 5:28pm |
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Masna
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Thank you so much! That's an awesome edit.
I think I understand some of the concept a little bit more now. I'll post a second attempt when it's done. EDIT: Here's another try. ![]() Edited by Masna - 17 March 2010 at 6:30pm |
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Masna
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I figured this was worthy of a new post. It's the final (?) rendition of the piece.
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Robinhood
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Bottom parts are good... But the circle has a lot of flat diagonal edges.
Shouldn't look too flat, it's a circle! :D EDIT ![]() Same goes for parts of the flame. Also the eye isn't looking very circular. EDIT x2 ![]() |
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