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Super Duper
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Topic: Please help improving.
Posted: 08 August 2010 at 6:11pm

Suraisu no kage meaning Slice shadow

I'm officially making my own game.
A ninja based game 2d of course.

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that is what I have so far.

What I do need is a good pallet change to make it more interesting.

A few enemy ideas.

And a tile set idea.

The story line is not quite done but I'm open for ideas.

Edited by Super Duper - 10 August 2010 at 5:00am

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Super Duper
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Posted: 08 August 2010 at 6:24pm

don't mind the ugly devil minion thing...

Ok... Heres some other sprites I have.

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Its another game I'm making but its on hold till I finish the one above, Its a zombie game.

Edited by Super Duper - 09 August 2010 at 3:40am

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meagz
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Posted: 08 August 2010 at 9:59pm

he has no arms!
your 1st palettes could do with some hue shifting too, i like the hat guy

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Super Duper
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Posted: 08 August 2010 at 10:33pm

Originally posted by meagz

he has no arms!
your 1st palettes could do with some hue shifting too, i like the hat guy

hey congrats on 100 posts :D

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W M
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Posted: 08 August 2010 at 10:41pm

(Even thought you said dont mind him ;D) You devil character is certainly the best developed of the bunch -- it accentuates not only shapes, but volume and abstraction that is really fun to look at. Pay attention to the details of the devil, such as the way the eyes wrap around the head, or how the thighs shift from organic shape to geometric, and try to apply that to the others.

Great start, and great style.

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Super Duper
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Posted: 08 August 2010 at 11:14pm

Thanks :D

Well I'll fix my guys and how about the colors... To me they seem boring.

Edit:

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Oh and could tell me how should i do my walk,/run for the main guy... The guy with the hat

Edited by Super Duper - 09 August 2010 at 2:16am

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Super Duper
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Posted: 09 August 2010 at 6:08pm

Ok so I'm Guessing my sprite are well some or really bad no wants to comment on it..

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Super Duper Midshipman Joined: 14 July 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 43	Topic: Please help improving. Posted: 08 August 2010 at 6:11pm
	Suraisu no kage meaning Slice shadow I'm officially making my own game. A ninja based game 2d of course. </a> that is what I have so far. What I do need is a good pallet change to make it more interesting. A few enemy ideas. And a tile set idea. The story line is not quite done but I'm open for ideas. Edited by Super Duper - 10 August 2010 at 5:00am
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Super Duper Midshipman Joined: 14 July 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 43	Posted: 08 August 2010 at 6:24pm
	don't mind the ugly devil minion thing... Ok... Heres some other sprites I have. </a> Its another game I'm making but its on hold till I finish the one above, Its a zombie game. Edited by Super Duper - 09 August 2010 at 3:40am
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meagz Commander Joined: 09 December 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 123	Posted: 08 August 2010 at 9:59pm
	he has no arms! your 1st palettes could do with some hue shifting too, i like the hat guy
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Super Duper Midshipman Joined: 14 July 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 43	Posted: 08 August 2010 at 10:33pm
	*Originally posted by meagz* he has no arms! your 1st palettes could do with some hue shifting too, i like the hat guy hey congrats on 100 posts :D
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W M Commander Joined: 08 November 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 132	Posted: 08 August 2010 at 10:41pm
	(Even thought you said dont mind him ;D) You devil character is certainly the best developed of the bunch -- it accentuates not only shapes, but volume and abstraction that is really fun to look at. Pay attention to the details of the devil, such as the way the eyes wrap around the head, or how the thighs shift from organic shape to geometric, and try to apply that to the others. Great start, and great style.
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Super Duper Midshipman Joined: 14 July 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 43	Posted: 08 August 2010 at 11:14pm
	Thanks :D Well I'll fix my guys and how about the colors... To me they seem boring. Edit: </a> Oh and could tell me how should i do my walk,/run for the main guy... The guy with the hat Edited by Super Duper - 09 August 2010 at 2:16am
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Super Duper Midshipman Joined: 14 July 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 43	Posted: 09 August 2010 at 6:08pm
	Ok so I'm Guessing my sprite are well some or really bad no wants to comment on it..
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