Pixel Joint Forum: Non-pixel digital work

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   Finally came back to this sketch wanting to "ink" it and add color BUT before I do that I would love some feedback! 
Know it needs allot of work.

Xixa (c) Dadward

btw, don't worry he is a close friend of mine and is ok with the fanart

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H\|F Commander Joined: 14 March 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 363	Topic: Non-pixel digital work Posted: 06 January 2011 at 10:31pm
	Finally came back to this sketch wanting to "ink" it and add color BUT before I do that I would love some feedback! Know it needs allot of work. Xixa (c) Dadward btw, don't worry he is a close friend of mine and is ok with the fanart
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Zeratanus Commander Joined: 03 December 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 576	Posted: 07 January 2011 at 3:48pm
	Compared to how drastically quick the body seems to get smaller the arms seem to stay the same length and the hands are big. Shoulders are also a bit wide themselves but its not as noticeable. Also the chest seems very flatly squashed (it's more of the cleavage area rather than the shirt that makes it look this way i think)
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H\|F Commander Joined: 14 March 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 363	Posted: 07 January 2011 at 8:46pm
	slight edit to her shoulders so they wouldn't look as wide. also I do need to point out that her hands/arms get very large from the elbow down. ref of how she is suppose to look. her arms here aren't as big because it's in my style. I understand what you are saying. Not sure how to fix it lol edit to her cleavage, totally know what you mean. I can seehow awful it looked lol Edited by H\|F - 07 January 2011 at 8:53pm
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