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Quote kallango Replybullet Topic: Buckingham Palace [help]
    Posted: 30 May 2011 at 4:32pm
Good person, I recently sent a pixel art in which the same pictures of Buckingham palace. What I wonder is, what if you could add in pixels (shadow, drawings, etc ...)

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I appreciate all the support and sorry for English (Google translator (Portuguese> English))
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Quote tanuki Replybullet Posted: 30 May 2011 at 5:13pm
quick edit-



I added a little bit of shadow to the left side. This gives it more depth.
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Quote kallango Replybullet Posted: 31 May 2011 at 1:15pm
Originally posted by tanuki

quick edit-



I added a little bit of shadow to the left side. This gives it more depth.


I actually saw an improvement in the design profundação, thank you for the edit and I think that is me going in the coming struggling
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Quote kallango Replybullet Posted: 01 June 2011 at 7:54am
Come on guys, I need more aid
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 01 June 2011 at 9:31am
well it's already been submitted to the gallery, so clearly it's no longer a WIP.
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 01 June 2011 at 6:03pm
By which I mean, ONLY submit to the gallery when a piece is finished and you no longer intend on doing any major work to it. Until then, go through the WIP forum and refine it. If you have both a WIP thread and a gallery entry, we assume the gallery pieces is a WIP (which isn't allowed).

anyway, here's an edit:



Partial edit of the left side. Your main issue right now is the building is flat. Nothing pops forward, nothing recedes back, it's all roughly the same tone. so I pushed some area back with shadow, and brought things like the pillars forward with lighter shades.

also, your palette was really washed out. you need more contrast- your colors should cover a wide range of lights and darks.


Edited by cure - 01 June 2011 at 6:05pm
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