Pixel Joint Forum: WIP: Haqu.

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   This is a little project I've been working on, I've only managed to shade her blouse, all critics are accepted.

I'm a newb so please explain what you mean while Critizing.

I'm also a newb of english, so sometimes I make grammar mistakes or misspell things :P

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Edited by Alanbato - 03 August 2011 at 7:24pm

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Alanbato Seaman Joined: 24 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 9	Topic: WIP: Haqu. Posted: 03 August 2011 at 3:01pm
	This is a little project I've been working on, I've only managed to shade her blouse, all critics are accepted. I'm a newb so please explain what you mean while Critizing. I'm also a newb of english, so sometimes I make grammar mistakes or misspell things :P Updated: Edited by Alanbato - 03 August 2011 at 7:24pm
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Alanbato Seaman Joined: 24 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 9	Posted: 03 August 2011 at 3:14pm
	Forum is dead. Sorry for using the dark arts of Necromancy.
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Miumau0 Commander Joined: 26 January 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 118	Posted: 03 August 2011 at 5:02pm
	yeah, it may seem that forum is dead, but theres still people to crit. It took 14 mins and you reposted and "bumped" this topic. -__- Lineart looks good, referencee for this?
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Alanbato Seaman Joined: 24 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 9	Posted: 03 August 2011 at 7:21pm
	Hehe, sorry ^^U I'm used to big forums. Anyway, the Line Art is not mine really D: One friend of mine made it, here's his DA Account: http://darthvulgar.deviantart.com/
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Alanbato Seaman Joined: 24 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 9	Posted: 03 August 2011 at 8:54pm
	Update: I'm having problems with the legs, any tips I could use? And what are my problems, what looks odd, what can I improve? Please, it's very important for me D:
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cure Commander Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859	Posted: 03 August 2011 at 9:32pm
	that's not really significant enough to warrant bumping your thread. just edit the first post instead, and only bump your thread if you have a major update or it falls off the front page and you still intend to work on it. ditch the dithering, you probably won't need it and you shouldn't be worrying about it at this point anyway. you need more contrast in your skin palette, it's all washed out right now. Edited by cure - 03 August 2011 at 9:33pm
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Alanbato Seaman Joined: 24 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 9	Posted: 03 August 2011 at 10:29pm
	Ok ok, I've learnt my lesson, don't bump and only do it after is buried in other threads. I all want is some feedback >_<
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yaomon17 Commander Joined: 07 September 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 136	Posted: 04 August 2011 at 3:08pm
	He did give feedback. Now you fix it and post an edit.
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