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AlexHW
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Quote AlexHW Replybullet Topic: Indian animation
    Posted: 15 October 2011 at 12:37am

here's what I'm currently working on.. basically an american indian character with various animations.
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Quote Sahrab Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2011 at 3:34am
Nice but the colors seem a bit dull and roll animations kind of seem wierd
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Quote jeremy Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2011 at 4:01am
The normal walk sorta looks like he's in high heels. Good to see you back :>
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2011 at 9:40am
@Sahrab: that's not really critique. how are the colors dull? which colors are dull? how is the animation weird? leaving 'drive-by' critiques that are vague and give no real information to the artist aren't very helpful.

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Quote Aastikya Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2011 at 10:04am
Everything looks okay to me.
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Quote Delicious Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2011 at 12:07pm
This is beautiful. Really love the colors, the animation and this character design. This might look like it's over-animated, but what about moving the clothe between his legs a bit more especially in the attacking phase? Keep up the excellent work.
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Quote reis Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2011 at 12:17pm
Great color, but as the Jalonso said, walking in high heels looks.
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Quote AlexHW Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2011 at 3:34pm
thanks for the replies, here's an update.

adjusted the feet in the walk anim.. also shifted a frame in the punch anim, and added more details to further frames.
i'll have to experiment with making the cloth move more.
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Quote ChrisButton Replybullet Posted: 17 October 2011 at 2:05am
Pretty cool! If you upload the frames or make some sort of sheet I could
analyze the animation for you. Is this rotoscoped by any chance?
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Quote AlexHW Replybullet Posted: 17 October 2011 at 2:22am
thanks :)
it's not rotoscoped, you can see some of the process explained here: www.alexhw.com
I'm not sure how to make a sprite sheet with photoshop, i really ought to figure that out if I keep add more animations x_x
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 17 October 2011 at 3:22am
It's quite cool except the air somersault.  He bends way too much than he should. I just googled it and the first link shows quite an artistic one.
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Quote jeremy Replybullet Posted: 17 October 2011 at 3:59am
Photoshop itself doesn't have a sprite sheet extractor, there are free addons you can google though.

P.S post some of those lovely environments you have on your site
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Quote Sahrab Replybullet Posted: 17 October 2011 at 5:24am
nice liked the update i could fell the power of those punches !!
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Quote CELS Replybullet Posted: 17 October 2011 at 5:37am

I kind of agree with Gecimen. It doesn't quite look natural, he looks almost like Sonic the Hedgehog when he jumps. I would extend his body a bit more. Though it might look better when he's actually moving across the screen, rather than spinning in mid-air.

I also have a bit of a problem with his uppercut punch. I know you're exaggerating it for the sake of a dynamic animation, but right now his punch has a range of five inches. He's basically just punching straight upwards, and wouldn't hit anyone unless they were standing directly nose-to-nose. Not really a mistake, but just... something to consider.
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