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Aastikya
Midshipman 
Joined: 19 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 86 |
   Topic: Crying AfroPosted: 07 November 2011 at 6:57am |
Critiques are always welcome. What can I fix or add to post it to PJ gallery? |
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Christoballs
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Joined: 31 January 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 182 |
Posted: 07 November 2011 at 10:58am |
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I don't know, what do you want to do with this?
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coolsarahkry
Midshipman
Joined: 23 June 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 90 |
Posted: 07 November 2011 at 3:15pm |
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His arms are too thin and short. Arms usually fall almost to the knees.
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Aastikya
Midshipman
Joined: 19 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 86 |
Posted: 08 November 2011 at 6:15am |
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I was trying to solve the shading problem of shirt and hair. The hair need to be look more like afro than simple. Also, thanks for pointing out the arm problem coolsarahkry.
Here is update:- 
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cure
Commander 
Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859 |
Posted: 08 November 2011 at 7:41am |
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arms are short (as has been pointed out), hairline is unnatural. too circular, and falls too far back on the sides. coat area looks washed-out, needs more contrast. looks like you saved as the wrong file type this last time and the image quality was ruined, so there's some cleaning to do.
be careful not to start too many WIP threads at once, stay focused. |
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